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renovation
04-03-2006, 11:20 AM
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We are revamping our business card and since we've been using you guys for other projects, we decided to give you guys a chance and see what you can come up with.

Our logo is attached.

I am open to all ideas you may have, so lets see what ya got! Keep in mind this is a double-sided card.

I need to also have the following info on the card:

Name: Aaron O'Hanlon
Address: 322 Bleecker Street, PMB #444, New York, NY 10014
phone:(888) 818-7215
Direct phone: (850) 748-7673
email: Aaron@FootBridgeMedia.com
website: www.FootBridgeMedia.com
tagline: Your Success is Our Business

BACK OF CARD
Effective, Affordable Marketing For Contractors
Websites, Newsletters, Direct Mail, Press Releases
and much, much more...

Save $100 For mentioning this postcard!

I will have the cards printed at 48hourprint.com and they have some business card templates here in case you need them: http://www.48hourprint.com/business-card-templates.html

Any other questions feel free to ask and I look forward to the designs!

renovation
04-03-2006, 12:47 PM
Sorry... Need to change the header. The Deadline is actually 4/10, not 3/10....

Thanks!

nhr
04-03-2006, 02:35 PM
Hallo:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b92/nhrdesign/_DO/FootBridgeMedia1_bc_DO.png

Thank you.

renovation
04-04-2006, 07:32 AM
Hi Nhs,

Not really feeling the design. I do like the banner of Save $100 on the back, but the ordering of information seems a little scattered.

Just to be clear

Front of Card Needs Following Information
Name
Address
phone numbers
email
website
tagline "Your Sucess Is Our Business"

Back of the card needs

Effective, Affordable Marketing For Contractors

and then in bullets
websites
newsletters
direct mail
press releases
much, much more

and the Save $100 For Mentioning This Card

Thanks for the entry and see if you can work something else.

nhr
04-04-2006, 08:07 AM
Thank you for feedback and thank you making all clear.
I will work on improvements.

nhr
04-04-2006, 04:30 PM
:)

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b92/nhrdesign/_DO/FootBridgeMedia2_bc_DO.png

Thank you.

renovation
04-05-2006, 05:21 AM
Hi NHR,

Much better. On the front of the card can you put the word DIRECT next to the 850 number.

On the back eliminate the commas, bold, or make "Effective, Affordable Marketing For Contractors" stand out more.

and I like the Save $100 part better in the first one. Not a fan of the italics.

imot
04-05-2006, 07:53 AM
Hi :)

Here is my entry, Let me know what do you think

http://webs.advance.com.ar/imot/footb/footb.jpg

RedLizard
04-05-2006, 12:45 PM
Hello, Here is my try
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h62/redlizard16/preview_002.jpg

glyphica
04-05-2006, 02:11 PM
Hello; Here is a take from me, let me know what you think. Thanks!

nhr
04-05-2006, 03:00 PM
Revision as requested:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b92/nhrdesign/_DO/FootBridgeMedia21_bc_DO.png

Thank you very much.

renovation
04-06-2006, 09:39 AM
Thanks guys for all the submissions so far. It is making it difficult on what one we like the best. Here are some suggestions on the current layout:

NHS
Much better. Is there anything you can do with the bullets on the back of the card. Not really a favorite of the dashes.

Kekepania
I like the back side, but the font seems very blocking. Not sure if it is the black text or it being so bold.

Red Lizard

It seems real busy. Not sure if it is the way the logo, is on a diagonal or not, but both sides seem very cluttered.

Agustin
I like both sides of the card and the layout. The only thing is the logo on the front. With it being all one color and so large, kind of looks like the United Way logo. Not sure what you can do about that.

Thanks guys... Also, if anyone wants to try something a little different, we don't have to be married to those colors. We do use some darker blues in our other marketing material. We are not married to those specifics. Just some ideas...

imot
04-06-2006, 10:19 AM
Hi,

A revision and a variation

http://webs.advance.com.ar/imot/footb/footb2.jpg

glyphica
04-06-2006, 11:56 AM
Hi again, ok I lighten up the font and introduced a dark blue. Let me know if this looks better to you :)

RedLizard
04-06-2006, 01:20 PM
Here is a new idea,
http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h62/redlizard16/preview_003.jpg

nhr
04-06-2006, 03:31 PM
My revision:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b92/nhrdesign/_DO/FootBridgeMedia22_bc_DO.png

Thank you.

djaka
04-06-2006, 11:25 PM
Hi,
I hope I'm not late,
this is my submission.
any comments are appreciated
thank you
:)

Fran
04-07-2006, 01:56 AM
:)

http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/3984/footbridgemediabc4qj.jpg

plum74
04-07-2006, 04:31 PM
HI, presenting my design for your business card. Please let me know if this design is close to the direction you would like to go for the design of your card. Thanks.

Lala

bogglins
04-07-2006, 06:29 PM
effective.. :)

renovation
04-08-2006, 05:16 AM
Wow.. Thanks for the new submissions. Makes it difficult... I think right now it is a toss up between bogglins, nhr, imot

NHR
Everything looks good, except the $100 offer. Don't like the slice in it, if you can make it a solid banner and maybe highlight it a bit.

BOGGLINS
Looks good, can you seperate the city and state, and differentiate the phone numbers, by makeing the 850 one DIRECT. Also, can you put the website somewhere on the back as well.

IMOT
I like the darker blue one, would like to see what you would do with the back as well.

In regards to everyone else, here is some feedback:

LALA
I do like the frame of the house, but the other graphics look too stock.

FRAN
I don't like the green and the name looks a bit cartoonish

DJAKA
That green is too much....

RedLizard
Sorry, I just don't like that. It looks like something, I could have done.

Kekepania
Everything still looks too blocky....

Thanks again for all the submissions, hopefully we will be able to make a decision by the end of this contest...

imot
04-08-2006, 06:33 AM
Hi,

Front and back (blue version)

http://webs.advance.com.ar/imot/footb/footb32.jpg

renovation
04-08-2006, 06:41 AM
Hi Agustin,

Just wanted to let you know that you are misspelling Success on the front of the card....

imot
04-08-2006, 06:56 AM
Oops!! :blush: ... ready, thanks


Hi Agustin,

Just wanted to let you know that you are misspelling Success on the front of the card....

bogglins
04-08-2006, 07:07 AM
revised..

nhr
04-08-2006, 03:56 PM
http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b92/nhrdesign/_DO/FootBridgeMedia23_bc_DO.png

Thank you.

Patel
04-08-2006, 07:10 PM
If this is moving in a the right direction let me know and I will try to get the back done tomorrow.
:)

Patel
04-08-2006, 07:25 PM
Has less of the blue rays

renovation
04-09-2006, 05:02 AM
HI Shima,

I like the first one, if you would like to complete the back

plum74
04-09-2006, 09:18 AM
Hi, here's another concept. Let me know if this is a possibility then I'll see if I can carry the same theme to the back. Thanks.


Lala

renovation
04-10-2006, 07:01 AM
Hi Guys,

I will be making my final decision by the end of today.

Shima,,

I would like to see the back of the card, if possible.

Lala,

I am not in love with the color scheme, but thank you for your entry...

Patel
04-10-2006, 11:35 AM
:eek:Almost time....I am going to try to get the back in by midnight I hope that is ok if not that is understandable since I joined in late!

Patel
04-10-2006, 06:08 PM
Here is the back of the card

Patel
04-10-2006, 06:41 PM
I think the back of the card I did could be better but times up thats what happens when I join in late! :weep:

renovation
04-11-2006, 10:40 AM
Sorry to get back to everyone so late. We've been busy on our end. But after trolling through all the excellent designs, we have decided that the winner is: SHIMA.

SHIMA
If you can please change the wording on the front from "FootBridge Media" to Footbridge Media. and please insert the website somewhere on the back we should be good to go.

Thanks again all! Will be having another contest in the upcoming week!

Patel
04-12-2006, 07:38 AM
Okay great! I guess the last minute drop in was worth it. I will get the changes up today.

Patel
04-12-2006, 08:53 AM
Here are the changes as specified. Please let me know if we are good to go. I will then private message you and provide you a link to download the final files to send to the printer.

Thank you,
Shima Patel

renovation
04-12-2006, 09:23 AM
Hi Shima,

The telephone number is missing numbers. It should be (850) 748-7673
Also lowercase the B in the email address as well, which should read Aaron@FootbridgeMedia.com.

That should be it. Thanks!

Patel
04-12-2006, 10:21 AM
Ok here it is again. Sorry for the errors. Let me know if we are set now and I will message you with the link.

Thanks,
Shima

renovation
04-12-2006, 10:32 AM
good to go....