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parrotthead
06-24-2006, 01:25 PM
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Hi Everyone!

We are very excited about your ideas and creativity in a new logo.

We are looking for a logo for a new retail e-commerce site. The name is South Coast Shopping and the web of course, www.southcoastshopping.com.

We want the logo to be inviting so an individual will want to come in for the shopping experience. Our market has been across all age groups, male and female, in the US and internationally. Realize that there is always a South Coast anywhere in the world.

We do not have a pre-determined image or icon in mind and would prefer as much creativity as possible.

We pride ourselves on quality and customer service since we feel that our customers are not just purchasing a product from us but also our service including extermely fast shipping. Our products range from elegant to middle to a few clearance items.

Any colors can be used but there are always certain "buy" colors to focus on. Logo can be Standard or Illustrative.

What first comes to mind when you see South Coast Shopping?

Good luck and we are excited to see creativity!

Tonya
06-24-2006, 11:51 PM
http://www.tonyagoodnow.com/clients/do/southcoast/southcoast1.gif

Blesseville
06-24-2006, 11:59 PM
http://www.medigraph.net/do/scs1.jpg

parrotthead
06-25-2006, 05:47 AM
Tonya... we like the font and layout of the wording. The palm tree however, may not work since there are south coasts in the north. For example, the south coast of the UK. Although a palm tree looks inviting for many it may not have a universal appeal to it.

Also, we may like a script font. We had purchase this font style, BodegaSerif-LightOldstyle and like it. If you need the font we can attached the file. I'm sure there are others we are not aware of.

parrotthead
06-25-2006, 05:53 AM
Medigraph...the shopping bag doesn't add an amount of elegance and the font too plain and small relative to the picture. Reference our notes to Tonya for some of our additional thoughts.

parrotthead
06-27-2006, 06:06 PM
Looking for more activity! Comments or questions?

splunking
06-27-2006, 06:15 PM
Hello There,
Here is my initial idea for your logo. I look forward to your feedback!

Thanks :D
- Cindy
Flashbrite Studios

http://www.flashbrite.com/images/DO/SOUTHCOAST1A.gif

parrotthead
06-27-2006, 07:45 PM
Hi Cindy,

We like the idea! A little too postage stamp like. Can it be opened up more?

Also, may the sky is too dark or needs to white with darker letters. How about different color combinations?

Here is the font we like that we mentioned above. We think that font may look better with your ideas!

Thanks,
Matt


<img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v326/parrotthead/SouthCoastShopping1.jpg">

splunking
06-28-2006, 06:55 PM
Hey there Matt,

Here are some of the changes you requested. I went to see if I could download the font family you requested and it was really expensive! :blush:

I changed the color of the sky, and tried to create a version of the logo that was less boxy, or postage stamplike.
I look forward to your comments!

Thanks,
Cindy
Flashbrite Studios

http://www.flashbrite.com/images/DO/SOUTHCOAST2A.gif

cazeyzman
06-28-2006, 09:48 PM
Hello,my first thoughts on it.
All comments welcome.
-Thanks
:)

parrotthead
06-29-2006, 05:49 PM
Hi Cindy, Thank you for your efforts! Your work is good. We are considering it but still feel it's too constrained and the font is not working. Is there a way to lighten the edges while feathering (not sure that's the term) out at all the edges to white? Thanks, Matt

parrotthead
06-29-2006, 05:55 PM
Hi cazeyzman, We like the idea, the look, and the feel. Try one without wave shadow on front (or behind) South Coast. The back ground may be too busy; want South Coast Shopping to stand out a little more. Try our font. Could you try different color combinations? That's not saying we don't like the colors now. Thanks, Matt

glyphica
06-29-2006, 06:56 PM
Here's one from me ;) Let me know what you think

splunking
06-29-2006, 06:59 PM
http://www.flashbrite.com/images/DO/SOUTHCOAST3A.gif

glyphica
06-29-2006, 07:17 PM
Here's mine with more font options. I don't have the font you requested though... :(

cazeyzman
06-29-2006, 09:46 PM
hello hello,
:)

Blesseville
06-30-2006, 02:23 PM
http://www.medigraph.net/do/scs2.jpg

parrotthead
06-30-2006, 05:47 PM
Hi Kekepania

Nice work. Not what we are looking for. Try removing the sun and birds and keep the swish and please add some more swishes.

Thanks

parrotthead
06-30-2006, 05:54 PM
Hi splunking, Cindy,

Much better! Try breaking up South Coast from Shopping so they are not on one line. Expand the Shopping font. The tan font is too light.

Thanks!

parrotthead
06-30-2006, 05:58 PM
Hi cazeyzman,

We liked your version 01 better. Please expand or variations on version 01. See our earlier post, message 12.

Or leave out the sun out version 2 and break up South Coast from Shopping. Try expanding the Shopping font.

Thanks!

parrotthead
06-30-2006, 06:02 PM
Hi Medigraph,

Not what we are looking for. Diagram is too constrained. Open it up! Also, we like the font! Try expanding the Shopping font to line up with on the outer edges of South Coast.

Thanks!

parrotthead
07-01-2006, 12:04 PM
Thank you all so far for your ideas and enteries! Keep them coming! Matt

glyphica
07-01-2006, 12:44 PM
Here's the revisions from me :)

parrotthead
07-01-2006, 03:40 PM
Hi Kekepania,

Thank you. Can you soften the swishes a little and change the font?

Thanks!

parrotthead
07-03-2006, 03:23 PM
Excellent ideas and logos from everyone! Don't gve up yet! Matt

pracus
07-03-2006, 05:02 PM
:)

parrotthead
07-03-2006, 06:07 PM
Hi pracus,

Like the idea but looks too southwest, not what we are looking for.

Thanks,
Matt

Paula23
07-03-2006, 07:49 PM
:)

Thanks, Paula

Rongie
07-03-2006, 09:21 PM
Hi there. Here's the first thing that comes to my mind when i hear the name Shopping. :)

Rongie
07-03-2006, 09:25 PM
'Waves' that forms the initial letter 'S'. - SouthCoast Shopping Brand mark

parrotthead
07-04-2006, 04:37 AM
paula23

Hi Paula,

Thank you. You won't have known this but there is a logo locally here for a casino boat that looks similar. We would like to not have a sun in the logo. Please make it less catroonish. Waiting for your reply.

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-04-2006, 04:52 AM
Hi Rongrn,

Thank you for your submissions.

The first one is not what we are looking for but thanks for letting us know that is the first thing that comes to mind when hearing the name shopping. That's important to us.

The second one is clever using the form for the S. To us it looks a little too much on the industrial side. Maybe it's too heavy. Please try a lighter look.

Thanks,
Matt

Blesseville
07-04-2006, 05:12 AM
http://www.medigraph.net/do/scs3.jpg

AlexKogan
07-04-2006, 07:38 AM
...one from me :)

cazeyzman
07-04-2006, 08:35 AM
hello, ;)

Blesseville
07-04-2006, 09:11 AM
Alternative font layout.

http://www.medigraph.net/do/scs3-1.jpg

Paula23
07-04-2006, 10:14 AM
Thanks for the feedback :)
Let me know if this looks better...

Paula23
07-04-2006, 10:15 AM
...another idea.

Thanks, Paula

splunking
07-04-2006, 12:16 PM
Here are the revisions you requested. I look forward to your feedback.

Thanks,
Cindy
Flashbrite Studios

http://www.flashbrite.com/images/DO/SOUTHCOAST3B.gif

parrotthead
07-04-2006, 12:32 PM
Paula23,

Much better! Would like color in the words South Coast and a different little softer font style.

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-04-2006, 04:08 PM
Hi Medigraph,

Thank you for the updates. It's not exactly what we are looking for but it's closer. A little too cartoonsih. Could you change the waves , remove the star fish, and expand the shopping font to the outer edges of South Coast?

Matt

Paula23
07-04-2006, 04:15 PM
Here are a few color/font variations :)

Paula23
07-04-2006, 04:16 PM
:)

Paula23
07-04-2006, 04:21 PM
:)

Paula23
07-04-2006, 04:22 PM
Thanks, Paula

Magentis
07-04-2006, 08:27 PM
Hello,

Here's my entry.

You comments are welcome.

Regards,
Caroline

Rongie
07-04-2006, 11:52 PM
Thanks for the feedback. Here's my another idea. :)

eziey
07-05-2006, 04:19 AM
:)

gig
07-05-2006, 08:10 AM
:)

Senter
07-05-2006, 06:49 PM
Ill have something for this in a bit.

parrotthead
07-05-2006, 06:57 PM
Hi Paula 23,

Thank you for all your ideas! We like them all, especially version 4 with the colors. Could you try different fonts with version 4? We have the font we mentioned earlier. Do you have it? We would like to see it.

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-05-2006, 07:03 PM
Hi splunking,

Thank you for the revisions. As we are moving forward, the concept is not exactly what we are looking for. We look forward to your other ideas!

Thanks,
Matt

Senter
07-05-2006, 07:03 PM
http://www.thesenter.com/designout/SouthCoast1.gif

parrotthead
07-05-2006, 07:06 PM
Hi vertlime,

Thank you for your entry. The logo looks too corporate for us. The font is ok but needs a little more spacing between the h and s.

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-05-2006, 07:07 PM
Hi Rongen,

Thanks for latest entry. Just not what we are looking for in our logo. Looking forward to more ideas!

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-05-2006, 07:09 PM
Hi eziey,

Thank you for your entry. The design is too much like a spider web. We look forward to your other ideas!

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-05-2006, 07:14 PM
Hi gig,

Thank you for your efforts and entry. It's not what we are looking for in our logo. It may appear too rigid? We don't like the star fish. It does have a little art deco in it. Keep the ideas coming!

Thank you,
Matt

parrotthead
07-05-2006, 07:19 PM
Hi Senter,

Thank you for your entry. The font needs to be larger relative to the logo. Please leave off the set sail portion. Also try others with different fonts.

Thanks,
Matt

Senter
07-05-2006, 07:27 PM
http://www.thesenter.com/designout/SouthCoast2.gif

Senter
07-05-2006, 07:27 PM
http://www.thesenter.com/designout/SouthCoast3.gif

Senter
07-05-2006, 07:28 PM
http://www.thesenter.com/designout/SouthCoast4.gif

Paula23
07-05-2006, 10:48 PM
Thanks for the feedback :)
I have over 300 fonts in my library, unfortunately
BodegaSerif-LightOldstyle isn't one of them.
If you would like to supply that font I would be happy to show you Version 4 using it.
Thanks in advance, Paula

Senter
07-06-2006, 05:35 PM
http://www.thesenter.com/designout/SouthCoast5.gif

Senter
07-06-2006, 05:35 PM
http://www.thesenter.com/designout/SouthCoast6.gif

Radu
07-06-2006, 05:37 PM
Here's an idea. Let me know if you want any changes.

Thank you.

parrotthead
07-06-2006, 07:51 PM
Hi Senter,

The font is too small.

Thank you,
Matt

Senter
07-06-2006, 07:54 PM
http://www.thesenter.com/designout/SouthCoast7.jpg

Senter
07-06-2006, 07:54 PM
http://www.thesenter.com/designout/SouthCoast8.jpg

eziey
07-06-2006, 10:57 PM
:)

Magentis
07-06-2006, 11:46 PM
Hello,

Here's another proposal.

Kind regards,
Caroline

Blesseville
07-07-2006, 01:49 AM
A new idea.

http://www.medigraph.net/do/scs4.jpg

eziey
07-07-2006, 02:49 AM
V3

Fabian
07-07-2006, 02:53 AM
:)

Paula23
07-07-2006, 04:33 PM
:)

Paula23
07-07-2006, 04:34 PM
Thanks,
Paula

parrotthead
07-08-2006, 05:21 AM
Hi Ruairi,

Thank you for your entry. Nice idea. Not what we are looking for through. Keep up with the good ideas!

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-08-2006, 05:23 AM
Hi Sentor,

Thanks for the updates. As we are looking at this more we realizing that the logo is just not working for us. Please keep your ideas coming!

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-08-2006, 05:27 AM
Hi eziey,

Thank you for this entry. Not what we are looking for. It reminds us too much of a state seal. Keep your ideas coming!

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-08-2006, 05:29 AM
Hi vertlime,

Thanks for your latest entry. This is not what we are looking for. However, we do like the two different fonts and the way they are arranged. Try different designs using the fonts.

Thank you,
Matt

parrotthead
07-08-2006, 05:32 AM
Hi Medigraph,

Thank you for your latest entry. The picture is not what we are looking for. It's too larger compared to the font. Keep your ideas coming!

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-08-2006, 05:33 AM
Hi eziey,

Thank you for this entry. This not what we are looking for. Too much of a credit card feel. Keep your ideas coming!

Thanks,
Matt

Magentis
07-08-2006, 05:36 AM
Hello,

Thank you for your comments. I will be working on something new keeping the font style/placement.

Kind regards,
Caroline

parrotthead
07-08-2006, 05:39 AM
Hi Fabian,

Thank you for your entry. Interesting concept. The picture reminfs us of shells or a hot air ballon. Colors are nice. The way the fonts are done is also unique. Please keep up with more ideas and variations.

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-08-2006, 05:47 AM
Hi Paula 23,

Thank you for the updates. Version 8 is too spread out without the shopping on a second line. Our font on version 9 is a little too tall. Version 4 is the best font except for the letter C. It needs to close just a little more. We like the shopping font different from South Coast as you have it. Keep your ideas coming!

Thank you,
Matt

Fabian
07-08-2006, 07:14 AM
Thanks,here is on more from me :)

Paula23
07-08-2006, 08:30 AM
"C" has been revised...

Paula23
07-08-2006, 08:30 AM
A few more ideas :)

Paula23
07-08-2006, 08:31 AM
Thanks, Paula

Senter
07-08-2006, 08:42 AM
Im working on some more for you will have them posted soon.

Senter
07-08-2006, 08:57 AM
http://www.thesenter.com/designout/SouthCoast9.gif

parrotthead
07-08-2006, 04:17 PM
Hi Fabian,

Thank you for the update. We like version 1 better than version 2. Please try making the font larger relative to the diagram and if you could expand shopping to be closer to lining up with the S in south and the T coast.

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-08-2006, 04:23 PM
Hi Paula23,

Thank you for all the updates! We like version 11. Can you change the shopping so it's the same size as in version 12? And drop the design just little from the wording. Like the colrs but would like to see some others combinations and a few bold colors.

Thanks,
Matt

shnickerdoodle studios
07-08-2006, 04:49 PM
One from me..

Thanks,
Deanna

parrotthead
07-08-2006, 04:55 PM
Hi Senter,

Thank you for the latest update. Not what we are looking for. Please keep up the ideas!

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-08-2006, 04:58 PM
Hi shnickerdoodle studios,

Thank you for your entry. We like the concept. The diagram doesn't work and the colors and color combination should be different.

Thank you,
Matt

Paula23
07-08-2006, 10:45 PM
Here are some different color combinations :)

Fabian
07-09-2006, 02:26 AM
Thanks.here is the revised design :)

parrotthead
07-09-2006, 05:41 AM
Hi Paula,

Thank you for the update. We still like version 11 the best with some miner tweaks. The lighter color fading at the ends of the waves are nice and we like that. Can that also be done in the black and white? The waves are just a little too close to the wording but not by much. It looks a little too crowded, especially in black and white. The size and placement of the word shopping is better in version 11. With those changes added please do another with the same color as version 11. Also, with the same changes and fading colors, do another with colors 281, 124, 1945. Thanks!

Update added:

We've been looking at version 11 and comparing it to version 12. We like the waves better in version 12 but with the colors in version 11. Just darken the colors and fade them as you did in version 11. Also, as mentioned above, the waves are just a little too close to the wording.

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-09-2006, 05:47 AM
Hi Fabian,

Thank you for the update. We like the changes. The wording is too small relative to the relative to the diagram. Maybe version 1 needs larger wording and not a smaller design as in version 2. Also, the complete logo needs to be larger. Colors look good. Try some other color combinations too with the original colors and the changes above. Thanks.

Fabian
07-09-2006, 02:26 PM
Thanks,resized the design and added a different colour scheme for your consideration :)

Fabian
07-09-2006, 02:33 PM
Also here is a colour study using the original colour scheme :)

Paula23
07-09-2006, 08:59 PM
Here are the adjustments :)

Paula23
07-09-2006, 09:00 PM
...and the requested colors..

Paula23
07-09-2006, 09:02 PM
.. I also thought I'd show you a 2 wave version :)

Thanks, Paula

parrotthead
07-10-2006, 04:16 AM
Hi Paula,

Thanks for the updates. We should have been a little more specific on the waves. We like the waves on version 12 with the A, B, C, D (there are two versions 12), Message #96. It's the the third wave (bottom one) that is the best. That third wave on version 11 has too much of a hook on the left side. Also, the third wave on version 12 is longer and extends to the right under the second p in shopping. We like that too. Except for the third wave we don't see to many differences between versions 11 and 13. Once the third wave is changed, we'd like to see your lor combination darkened o few shades. One other idea is to have the third wave lighter than the second wave or just reverse the colors between the second and third waves.

Forget the colors we requested on version 14.

Version 15 is nice with two waves but we are leaning towards three waves. Let's try one wave too.

Thank you for all your updates and efforts.

Matt

Paula23
07-10-2006, 09:38 AM
Sorry about the duplicate Version Numbers :blush:
Here are the adjustments.
Let me know if I missed anything.
Here is the original colors darkebed a shade.
As far as the third wave goes, yes I had adjusted it when I was using the bolder colors.
It popped out more so I thought I would soften the left hand side.
Tat wave is used in the following versions...

Paula23
07-10-2006, 09:41 AM
..same as above, but with the second and third wave colors
reversed..

Paula23
07-10-2006, 09:43 AM
Here is a one wave version.
Let me know ifd you'd like to see any other adjustments :)


thanks, Paula

parrotthead
07-10-2006, 04:36 PM
Hi Paula,

Thank you again. Version 16 is getting closer to what we like. The word SHOPPING in version 16 is too long and should be as in version 13.

The black and white on the left on version 16 needs these changes: the hook needs softened and the third wave on right needs softened.

Thanks,
Matt

Paula23
07-10-2006, 07:34 PM
Let me know how this looks :D

Thanks, Paula

parrotthead
07-10-2006, 08:31 PM
Paula,

The word SHOPPING is fine on the right side (letter G) but still too much over (letter S) from the left edge of the letter C in Coast. In other words SHOPPING is completely under the word Coast and not beyond.

We have now noticed the word SHOPPING also needs to be dropped down a little from the word Coast.

Thanks,
Matt

Paula23
07-10-2006, 09:57 PM
Hows this?
Thanks, Paula :)

Senter
07-10-2006, 11:38 PM
http://www.thesenter.com/designout/SouthCoast10.gif

parrotthead
07-11-2006, 05:45 PM
Hi Fabian,

Thank you for your submissions. After reviewing we feel that the vesions are not what we are looking for. Always open for new ideas.

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-11-2006, 05:48 PM
Hi Paula,

Version 20 is looking very good. A question regarding the black and white on the left; the hook and the right side of the third wave are not faded as the other waves. Is that fixable?

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-11-2006, 05:50 PM
Hi Senter,

Thank you for your update. Very unique except we don't like the line through Coast. Maybe some other variations.

Thank you,
Matt

Fabian
07-11-2006, 07:38 PM
Thanks,one more from me :)

Paula23
07-12-2006, 01:13 PM
Hi,
Here is the adjustment on the third faded black wave :)

Paula23
07-12-2006, 01:14 PM
..and here is an iconic version of the design which could
be used as a branding symbol :)

Thanks, Paula

parrotthead
07-12-2006, 07:02 PM
Paula,

Thank you for the update in version 21. After looking closer could you please move the S in SHOPPING a little more to the right and keeping the G where it is.

We like the SCS in version but the font is a little too tall. Not sure if we like the gray shadow effect. Please change both.

Thank you,
Matt

parrotthead
07-12-2006, 07:04 PM
Hi Fabian,

Thank you for your latest entry. The font style is good but the picture doesn't do much for us.

Thanks,
Matt

Senter
07-12-2006, 07:55 PM
I will be posting a revision tomorrow.

djaka
07-13-2006, 01:32 AM
Hello,
Any comments are appreciated
thank you
:)

Senter
07-13-2006, 07:26 PM
I will post my revision later tonight. Thanks for the comments.

Paula23
07-13-2006, 09:35 PM
Sorry for the delay :)
Here are the adjustments.
The shadow has been removed,
and "shopping" has been moved over ..

Paula23
07-13-2006, 09:36 PM
The "SCS" has been reduced,and the hook on the
wave enlarged a bit to accomodate the size of the text...

Paula23
07-13-2006, 09:44 PM
And a slight adjustment on the waves...

Thanks, Paula

BlueCherryGraphics
07-14-2006, 01:52 AM
v1

parrotthead
07-14-2006, 04:05 AM
Paula,

We like version 24 better than version 25. On version 24 just font is too tall, the space between letters and waves are ok on version 24.

Thank you,
Matt

parrotthead
07-14-2006, 04:07 AM
Hi djaka,

Thank you for your entry. It's not what we are looking for.

Thank you,
Matt

parrotthead
07-14-2006, 04:08 AM
Hi BlueCherryGraphics,

Thank you for your entry. It's doesn't do much for us. Please keep up with other ideas.

Thank you,
Matt

parrotthead
07-15-2006, 10:47 AM
Hi Paula,

We like versions 23 and 24. However, the font is a little too tall on version 24.

Thank you,
Matt

Paula23
07-15-2006, 12:34 PM
:)

parrotthead
07-15-2006, 01:21 PM
Paula,

Thank you for the update.

Regarding version 26: 1) The font height is ok now on version 26 but the font spacing is too far apart. We would like it as in version 24. 2) Drop the complete wave and hook down a little so there is a liitle more spacing between the bottom of the font and the top of first wave.

Regarding version 23: 1) we would like to see how this would look with a little taller font if you can.

Thank you,
Matt

Senter
07-15-2006, 01:36 PM
http://www.thesenter.com/designout/SouthCoast11.gif

parrotthead
07-16-2006, 07:45 AM
Hi Senter,

Thank you for the latest. Interesting logo. We like the concept but are not sure what changes are needed yet. Please provide some variations.

Thanks,
Matt

Senter
07-16-2006, 06:40 PM
http://www.thesenter.com/designout/SouthCoast12.gif

Senter
07-16-2006, 06:40 PM
http://www.thesenter.com/designout/SouthCoast13.gif

Senter
07-16-2006, 06:45 PM
http://www.thesenter.com/designout/SouthCoast14.gif

skyvee
07-17-2006, 07:50 PM
Hi! Here's my entry. Thanks! :)

Paula23
07-19-2006, 11:55 PM
Regarding version 26: 1) The font height is ok now on version 26 but the font spacing is too far apart. We would like it as in version 24. 2) Drop the complete wave and hook down a little so there is a liitle more spacing between the bottom of the font and the top of first wave.


Here are the requested revisions :)

Paula23
07-19-2006, 11:59 PM
Regarding version 23: 1) we would like to see how this would look with a little taller font if you can.

Here are a few taller fonts.

Thanks, Paula

parrotthead
07-23-2006, 04:24 PM
Hi Blue Cherry Graphics,

Reconsidering your entry. We like that the wording South Coast stands out; the wording it grabs your attention. Please try other color combinatios. Also, a couple of other designs.

Thank you,
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
07-23-2006, 04:42 PM
Hi Matt,

Here are the color variations. Will see what I can do for another design option.

parrotthead
07-24-2006, 03:38 PM
Paula,

Thank you for the updates. We realize that the words South Coast need to stand out more. Since we like version 23, tried different fonts in version 28 which didn't work, can you try taking version 23 and keeping the font the same but making the waves more narrow so that they are not so overwhelming.

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
07-24-2006, 03:41 PM
Hi Jennifer,

Thank you for version 2 update. The colors variations don't seem the work. Your version 1 was better but needs to be just a little more darker.

Thanks,
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
07-24-2006, 03:57 PM
v3

Paula23
07-24-2006, 11:54 PM
:)

parrotthead
07-26-2006, 05:57 PM
Hi Jennifer,

Thank you for your updates on version 3. We like the last one the best. One request...could you try some small variations of the blue so it's not so much a slate blue.

Thank you,
Matt

parrotthead
07-26-2006, 05:59 PM
Hi Paula,

Thank you for your updates to vesion 29. We like the narrower waves because South Coast stands out a little more now. Could you try and take the bold off Shopping.

Thank you,
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
07-26-2006, 06:50 PM
Hi Matt,

Here are the new blues.

Paula23
07-28-2006, 11:39 PM
Sorry fo rthe delay :)

parrotthead
07-30-2006, 04:40 PM
Paula,

Thank you for the update. You are on the short list. We are still a little concerned that the waves take away from the words as opposed to complimenting it.

Thank you,
Matt

parrotthead
07-30-2006, 05:03 PM
Jennifer,

Thank you for the updates. You are on our short list. We like the logo alot. The new blues on version 4 seemed to actually hurt the image a little. Version 3: can you try different blues in the same PMS 6xx series with the green at PMS 325 and PMS 326. Also please smooth out the left side edge of the outer circle just a little; not sure yet, need to see it. We do like what you are trying to do with the circle there.

Thank you,
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
07-31-2006, 05:04 PM
Sorry; missed the notification on this one. Will have the change for you tomorrow.

BlueCherryGraphics
08-01-2006, 08:49 AM
v5

parrotthead
08-01-2006, 07:29 PM
Hi Jennifer,

Thank you for the updates. The last one of the four in version 5 is better color wise.

The smoothing of the left edge of the outer circle is too much, i.e. too smooth. Please try something between versions 4 and 5.

Thank you,
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
08-03-2006, 11:21 PM
Will post my revisions this afternoon (Friday).

parrotthead
08-06-2006, 01:08 PM
Hi Jennifer,

Please send updates.

Thank you,
Matt

parrotthead
08-06-2006, 01:13 PM
Paula,

Thank you for taking the bold off Shopping. However, taking the bold off misaligned the word under the word Coast. We would like to see Shopping centered under Coast.

Also, the waves need to be a little more thinner still.

Thank you,
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
08-06-2006, 03:44 PM
v6

parrotthead
08-13-2006, 06:13 PM
Hi Jennifer,

The version 6 is the same as version regarding the outer circle on the left. It's needs a different spur on it. Version 5 is too smooth.

Thanks,
Matt

Paula23
08-13-2006, 09:44 PM
:)

BlueCherryGraphics
08-14-2006, 12:57 PM
I did smooth it slightly, but I will do a little more work on it. Will post late tonight.

BlueCherryGraphics
08-15-2006, 05:31 AM
v7

parrotthead
08-17-2006, 06:35 PM
Paula,

Thank you for the update. Is the font bold? With the thinner waves, the font may look too bold now. Could you please change?

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
08-17-2006, 06:46 PM
Jennifer,

Thank you for the update. Let's go back to version 5, the left edge of the outer circle - it seems to fat at the outer left edge. Please try smoothing all the circles and changing that outer left edge.

Thanks,
Matt

parrotthead
08-20-2006, 06:00 PM
Jennifer,

Hope all is ok.

Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
08-20-2006, 06:09 PM
Hi,

DD starts K tomorrow, so have been out of pocket trying to get her school stuff ready. Will try and post that revision tonight; if not, will do so tomorrow.

Jenny

BlueCherryGraphics
08-22-2006, 09:22 AM
v8

Outer edge not so "fat" and smoother, but not perfectly smooth.

Let me know any change requests and I'll take care of them tonight.

parrotthead
08-23-2006, 08:13 PM
Jennifer,

Getting closer. The symmetry of the fix that was done on v8 doesn't look right now. Please correct.

Thanks,
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
08-24-2006, 02:04 PM
v9

parrotthead
09-02-2006, 02:54 PM
Jennifer,

Thank you for the update. Had to walk away from it a little and relook at it. Everything is looking good except the outside circle. The outside circle needs to be smoother and more symmertical with the other two circles.

Thanks,
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
09-04-2006, 03:05 PM
v10

parrotthead
09-10-2006, 09:02 PM
Jennifer,

We like the placement of the words and the circles length (they wrap around more in front) and their thiness on the top one. We also like the smoothness of the circles on the lower one. Please try combining the best from each into one logo.

Thanks,
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
09-11-2006, 01:20 AM
Here are a couple of options

v11

BlueCherryGraphics
09-11-2006, 01:20 AM
v12

parrotthead
09-14-2006, 06:10 PM
Jennifer,

Let's go back to version 9. Keep it exactly the same but just smooth out the outer circle.

Thanks,
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
09-14-2006, 06:12 PM
Smooth out the outer part of the "ripple" or both the inner and the outer part?

parrotthead
09-16-2006, 09:47 PM
Just the inner part. Thanks

BlueCherryGraphics
09-20-2006, 03:36 PM
v13

parrotthead
09-20-2006, 06:25 PM
So close. Look carefully at backside of the outer circle in version 9. It is closer to the the bottom part of the letter S; in other words the back side of the outer circle is just a little longer. Extend that like it is in version 9 to version 13. Also on the outer circle, the outer part of of it seems not symmetrical; the outer edge of the outer cirle on the right is a little too thick. Thanks.

Senter
09-20-2006, 06:47 PM
Parrotthead...
Have you selected BlueCherry as your designer on this project? If not are you still open for new entries.

parrotthead
09-21-2006, 04:38 PM
We are very close to our final selection but always welcome new entries. Thank you.

BlueCherryGraphics
09-21-2006, 11:09 PM
Hello,

Will post my revisions Friday night.

BlueCherryGraphics
09-23-2006, 12:52 AM
v14

parrotthead
09-24-2006, 06:55 PM
Jennifer,

Thank you for the latest update. We like it. One last adjustment is the outer circle on the left side needs have better arc...like the middle circle does. In other words, the outer edge of the outer circle on the left side needs to look like the outer edge of the middle circle on the left side. The outer edge of the outer circle is not symmetrical when compared to the outer edge of the middle circle on the left side. Please change.

Thank you,
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
09-25-2006, 11:54 AM
That's the result of the previous requests you've made. I have changed it here to an exact duplicate of the outer left edge of the middle ring, but it will be less smooth (since I smoother the outer edge of the left ring at your request earlier).

v15

parrotthead
10-17-2006, 08:12 PM
We have decided on Version 14 from Blue Cherry Graphics. Please release funds to Blue Cherry Graphics. Thank you Jennifer!

We want to thank everyone for their efforts and creativity.

BlueCherryGraphics
10-18-2006, 04:33 AM
Hi,

Thank you for selecting my design.

Detailed information regarding your files, as well as download information has been sent to you by private message. Please go to the following link to find the message:

http://www.designoutpost.com/forums/private.php?

Thanks again,

abby
10-18-2006, 11:13 AM
Project Update: This project has been moved to the Revisions Forum.

Client please post a message after you have downloaded your files. Thank you