[ProjectComplete] First Inventories logo - $125 - Nov 13th

[3bedsemi]

Admin code added by Abby - 3H022729TC271123R

Hello designoutposters.

Company Name
First Inventories

What text should be included in the main part of the logo?
First Inventories ( could be together? or separate)

What type of product or service do you offer?
Home Inventory service to landlords, estate agents,letting agents e.t.c catalogue of items that are given to a tennant when they take out a home rental agreement from a landlord.

How long have you been in business?
Just started

What do you hope to accomplish with your new identity?
Need a logo that will be used on website, merchandise, letter head, watermark for word documents

What are your long term goals?
To establish my company as a leading professional inventory service provider.

When is the deadline for final entries before choosing a designer?
None - But we'll say November 13th ( I am in venice, Italy from 8th to 11th November and may/maynot be online - depends on internet availablity)

What type of logo would you like?
We're open to seeing what is submitted. We would like something bold, yet professional looking. With few colours. clean and crisp.

Do you have any colors in mind for your logo? (if so, why?)
no colours in mind . I like light blue! or light fresh colours.

Do you have any specific images or icons in mind that you would definitely like to see incorporated into your logo?
Going to leave this to you... my creativity skills are non-existant.

What is your tagline or slogan?
Fast and Detailed Professional Inventories

Where will your new logo be used?
Website, merchandise, letter head , water marks on documents etc.

[pracus]

:)

[Blesseville]

http://www.blesseville.com/do/fie1.jpg

[Asparagus Productions]

http://www.asparagusproductions.com/designoutpost/firstinventories_001.jpg

[3bedsemi]

Hi, thanks for your submissions ( will I be getting any more new submissions? )... Let me give you some feedback:
1. pracus
- I like the integrated Fi initials. The logo to me has a cartoon feel which I am not feeling. Looking for something clean and professional. I like the overall proportion/size and "first" being on top of the "inventories". Not keen on the shadow
2. medigraph
Not keen on the proportion. Not keen on the tag being part of the logo. Not feeling the roof shaped F and i.
3. asparagus productions
not feeling the overall logo. I like the clean aspect of the logo. not that keen on the boldness of the font used for "first".

[nhr]

Hello:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b92/nhrdesign/DO/FirstInventories_nhr.png

Thank you.

[3bedsemi]

Hi nhr, thanks for the entry. I like the overall proportion but not keen on the play on "1" .wonder what would it look like with a capital F and capital i ?

cheers

[nhr]

Thank you for the feedback.

Revision is here:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b92/nhrdesign/DO/FirstInventories2_nhr.png

[BlueCherryGraphics]

v1

[djaka]

any comments are appreciated
thank you
:)

[djaka]

1st & i
any comments are appreciated
thank you
:)

[skyvee]

my entry...Thanks! :)

[carlos(esparza)]

Hi, responding to your mention of a "watermark" . . .

<img src="http://carlos.errorproductions.com/outpost/firstinventories.png">

[eziey]

:)

[3bedsemi]

thanks everybody for your entries. here is some feedback.


NHR - Version 2 - This looks better. Capital F and I look good and it looks better with teh house graphic.
BlueCherry - version 1 - very clean and fresh feel, like the play on house and checklist. Could the inventories word be made a little smaller or first made a little larger e.t.c to make it more rectangular? I like the colours.
djaka - ver 1 - Too squashed and do not like the overall proportion.
djaka - ver 2 - like the clever play on 1st and i but think the overall look is too long and it's too busy.
skyvee - ver 1 - I do not like overall look. I do like the F and i symbol. overall, it reminds me of the Financial Times Newspaper in the UK.
carlos - ver 1 - i aim to use part of the logo for the water mark on my documents. thanks
eziey - ver 1 - The logo has a formula 1 feel to it. It's angular which I do not like. Not keen on the overall proportion.


The deadline was yesterday but would like to keep this open for a couple more days to give all version 1 entries a chance to resubmit. So far BlueCherrygraphics -version 1 is my favourite as it contains nearly all the elements that make me smile! :D

[djaka]

thank you for the feedback,
this is the revision
regards
:)

[3bedsemi]

djaka - ver 3 - the new changes look smarter and cleaner but not feeling the font...

I have had some discussions with friends and have decided that BlueCherryGraphic's is the best logo but would like to see some revisions as per feedback earlier before choosing a final design. Would this be possible?

[djaka]

thank you for the feedback
this is the revision
:)

[3bedsemi]

djaka - ver 4 - thansk for the revision. The F and the i do not look correct as the bottom of the F and the top of the I seems too close together

[djaka]

thank you for the feedback,
this is the revision
:)

[3bedsemi]

Hello

feedback for djka revesion 5 - thanks for your revision. I am not feeling the logo and think the overall look is too busy.

I still like BlueCherry's - version 1 - but would like a couple of more changes made as per my request earlier before potentially closing the project and announcing the winner. :) My feedback for this logo was: "very clean and fresh feel, like the play on house and checklist. Could the inventories word be made a little smaller or first made a little larger e.t.c to make it more rectangular? I like the colours."

[BlueCherryGraphics]

Sorry! I've been sick and forgot to post the revision. Here it is.

[3bedsemi]

Hi Bluecherry

thanks for version 2. I am not sure which one to go for! version 1 looks better on the eye than version 2 but version 2 may sit better on stationery...

Also, can you modify version 1 and instead of using the word "first", cany you replace it with the word "fresh".

I would like to wrap things up by the end of today if possible

thanks

[BlueCherryGraphics]

Here you go. I have no problem doing a kit for each color scheme if you can't decide.

[3bedsemi]

hi bluecherry , thanks for the update. can you please make the Fresh a little bit more larger as it looks squeezed and not proportioned.

i may ask you to produce a kit for version 1 and also for a version using "fresh".

cheers

[BlueCherryGraphics]

Hi,

*I can either enlarge it, or spread it out, but I can't do both and still have it fit where it is.

Jenny

[3bedsemi]

Hi, i could be completely wrong, but it seems like the Fresh font is slightly smaller than the font used for inventories. If this is not true then can you just make it a little larger.

thanks

[BlueCherryGraphics]

I was wrong. I could enlarge it slightly and spread it slightly.

"Fresh" (and "First") are smaller in order to fit in that nook between the "I" and "t".

[3bedsemi]

Hi everybody

thanks to all who participated in this Design project.

The winner is BlueCherry.:tup: I have chosen this design because it is clean, simple looking and the clever half house with the tick boxes sums up my business.

BlueCherry, can you please create a kit for version 1 and version 4. The reason for using the word fresh is that i may decide to change my business name.

regards

[BlueCherryGraphics]

Hi,

Thank you for selecting my design.

Detailed information regarding your files, as well as download information has been sent to you by private message. Please go to the following link to find the message:

http://www.designoutpost.com/forums/private.php?

Thanks again,

[abby]

Project Update: This project has been moved to the Revisions Forum.

Client please post a message after you have downloaded your files. Thank you

[3bedsemi]

Hi, all files have been downloaded

thank you

3bedsemil