[Project Complete]Due: March 9th - PrecisionDealer.com $1,600

[jstutchman]

I searched for days for a question that was not easily googable...

[Patel]

Well done! :)

[Blesseville]

This was fun, thank you :)

[jstutchman]

I will post feedback on designs later this afternoon. That was fun, maybe we will do another one in the near future...

[BlueCherryGraphics]

Congrats Jeff. ;)

[giant]

Congratz Offbeat! :)
Who stole the lamp? Now, how find it? :p

[giant]

I mean, who find it?
Any trivia again? :)

[Ratbaggy]

**** (that was d-a-m-n, nothing worse) time difference!

Well done Offbeater.

[TwistedNewMedia]

I missed it! darn, nice one offbeat.

[Fabian]

Congrats Offbeat.

Thanks J for bring such great projects to us :yes:

[jstutchman]

taldo
Version 3

Thanks for the idea, but I want the design of the logo to speak the ideas of the business model.

[jstutchman]

BlueCherryGraphics
Version 4

Likes: Your designs are well balanced, I like a flowing logo.

Dislikes: I can see the message in the design, but I want the design to be more powerful in presenting the elements of the business concept. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

skyvee
Version_03

Likes: Nice mathmatical representation of precision.

Dislikes: Not the type of design that I am looking for. The logo needs to speak visually about the business concept and connect with the prospective client. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

I thought I would help everyone dial in to the design that is needed. There have been many very good submissions. I hope that this post inspires someone to tie it all together. The bold new business concept and the prospective customer.

Don't try to design a logo that would impress me. We need a logo that will catch the attention of the prospective client and incorporate the company's powerful money saving efficiency. A dealership owner or top management.

1. The average dealership owner is in his fifties. Yes, 90% of dealer owners are male. Most of them don't even know how to program a VCR, and computers are very intimidating.

2. Most of the upper management are male and are 40 or above. This generation is ambitious and are comfortable with computers, but have no idea what a network really is - not the hip technology generation.

So, not trying to confuse everyone, a design that helps state the unique business model but also connects with the average prospective customer. :D

[jstutchman]

BlueCherryGraphics
Version 6

Likes: nice pitch, nice design.

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for. Thanks. Keep going please.

[jstutchman]

Medigraph
Version 4.0

Likes: Design has great impact, your artwork always makes a statement.

Dislikes: I need the design to more directly state the business model, but connect with the prospective client. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

Medigraph
Version 5.0

Same comments as design 4.0, please submit more original ideas. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

Medigraph
Version 6.0

Same comments as design 4.0, please submit more original ideas. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

Medigraph
Version 7.0

Same comments as design 4.0, please submit more original ideas. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

Medigraph
Version 8.0

Likes: I am not sure whether you meant to do this, but at first I see a road design, then I see a shark fin (which represents precision and a basic thought of the prospective customer, Nice... powerful concept). The graphical representation of precision does not have to be about bullseye designs. Sharks are all about precision. There are many other ideas of precision out there on the planet....

Dislikes: No dislikes.

PS, I would ask that other artists not submit variations off this design, but the floor is open to the interpretation of "precision". Great job Medigraph.... A++++

[jstutchman]

Fabian
Version 4

Looking for a design with more intensity and aggressiveness. Thanks for the idea, keep going.

[jstutchman]

1

[jstutchman]

tini1
Version 6

Likes: Good pitch, I LIKE A GOOD PITCH for the concept. Nice balanced design and appeasing to the eye.

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

Davegk
Version 1

Likes: Concept speaks pecision on many levels.

Dislikes: I am looking for a design more than the common tire and bullseye. Look forward to more concepts from you. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

Davegk
Version 2

Likes: A very different design with nice math.

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for. Look forward to more concepts from you. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

Davegk
Version 3

Not the design I am looking for. Look forward to more concepts from you. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

carlos(esparza)
Version 01

Likes: Very unique message of concept, the inner design speaks symbolic relationship, very interesting.

I would like more original concepts from you. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

DesignGeneral
Version 01

Likes: Wow, the best pitch so far, did you go to school for this? Your marketing skills are obvious on this design.

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for. Looking for something more aggressive in the presentation of "precision". Look forward to more concepts from you. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

Pracus
Version 11

Likes: Like the play on the total design. Very talented.

Dislikes: Design is too abstract, the prospective customers wake up every morning to make money, not appreciate great art - good job though - Reminds me of a classic art piece. Look forward to more concepts from you. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

Taldo
Version 4

Likes: Design states a global impact on "precision".

Dislikes: The end customer is not thinking global, they are thinking local profit. The business model is about maximizing profit while increasing the customer's customer satisfaction - which inturn increases profit by market share. Look forward to more concepts from you. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

IDarwish
Version 1

Likes: Design speaks precision in the measurement of a customer common idea of a gauge. Simple, but powerful. Good job

Dislikes: No dislikes. Look forward to more original concepts from you. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

IDarwish
Version 2

Version 1 far overpowered concept version 2. Please post new original concepts...

[jstutchman]

I will post design feedback from this point forward before the weekend.

[jstutchman]

I will be posting additional prize money and the final prize award amounts next week. Thanks to every artist for all the hard work. I appreciate each and every post, hope my comments never offend or discourage anyone... :D

We will do one more trivia round before the end of this contest, stay tuned for details.

[jstutchman]

Roooooaarrr!

[OffbeatDesign]

Version 20. Back to precision, predictability, calculations, focus. Guaranteed results every time.

[davegk]

another idea...
"P" and "D" together in a strong symbol with a clear focal point.
-David

[nhr]

Me, again:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b92/nhrdesign/DO_/PD60_nhr.png

Thank you very much :)

[Mark]

:)

[Artemii]

v2

[Blesseville]

Thank you for the feedback. My original idea was to develop a shark fin, for representing the concepts precision and determination. Then I decided to engage it with the road design which symbolizes both the nature of the business and diverse logistics aspect. :)


Medigraph
Version 8.0

Likes: I am not sure whether you meant to do this, but at first I see a road design, then I see a shark fin (which represents precision and a basic thought of the prospective customer, Nice... powerful concept). The graphical representation of precision does not have to be about bullseye designs. Sharks are all about precision. There are many other ideas of precision out there on the planet....

Dislikes: No dislikes.

PS, I would ask that other artists not submit variations off this design, but the floor is open to the interpretation of "precision". Great job Medigraph.... A++++

[jstutchman]

I am running behind, as I have to take care of a television ad meeting. Everyone is submitting great concepts and I will give feedback on every design. Cut the floor up with ideas... Someone will win big. Thanks to all.

[jstutchman]

Behind, so I owe.

[jstutchman]

Senter
Version 1

Likes: Different than other concepts, thanks.

Dislikes: Looking for something more aggresive in design and message, please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

Taldo
Version 5

Likes: Design is very precise. Has message.

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for, good job. Look forward to more ideas from you...

[jstutchman]

graphxguy
Version 1

Likes: Very unique and memorable design. Makes an impact.

Dislikes: Not the concept I am looking for. Thinking more aggressive in thought... Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

Fabian
Version 5

Likes: Good pitch that elevates the design. Good job

Dislikes: This project needs a design that is more aggressive. Please post more concepts.

[jstutchman]

Fabian
Version 6

Same comments as version 5, but version 6 has a very nice polish to it.

[jstutchman]

Will post more later today after meetings...

[Fabian]

Hey J,

More aggressive, a precise movement with a road feel :)

[Fabian]

There two ways this design can be seen. Firstly It could be seen as person with arm across the body in a secure authourian way.Alternatively, a driver behind the wheel facing right.

Well that is my ideology behind the logomark :D

[castell]

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev2.gif

Castell

[DesignGeneral]

If you combine an eagle eye and some claws you've got high precision. I'll let you to deal with that :)

[castell]

An interesting aggressive combination between the letters "D" and "P".

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev3.gif

Castell

[castell]

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev4.gif

[castell]

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev5.gif

Castell

[castell]

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev6.gif

Castell

[Taldo]

Out of the dealership and onto the road which is every dealership's objective...

[Carl]

Conceptual, hence only the BW version.

The synergy of PrecisionDealer.com, the Dealer and the Consumer. The result is a diamond: durable, valuable, precise.

[pracus]

:)

[nhr]

...

[Just J]

Sorry, I didn't read through the entire thread to get all of your feedback. I hope I'm not too far off base. :)

[jstutchman]

Please forgive me; I had some sudden hot irons in the fire that detracted me from this contest /collaboration...

Because I have been absent for a few days, I am extending the closing date by 14 days. The reason for the extension is so that I can give every artist the proper feedback on each submission. Everyone deserves feedback and the time to make adjustments.

To all artists; please continue to make submissions made on my feedback so far. I will provide feedback on all entries within the next few days.

I will post the final prize postings on Feb 23rd, it will be HOTTT! The contest will end on March 2nd at Midnight US CST. We will have one last trivia round before the end as well…

[jstutchman]

And I Mean Hottt! Insane!!!

[jstutchman]

Lots of slobber!

[jstutchman]

Thanks for the quick update to the contest Moderators.

[Leclerk]

http://www.logoholik.com/do/logoholik_precisiondealer03.gif

[freetime]

Another look.

[freetime]

Another look.

[TwistedNewMedia]

Hi there,

Here is my concept for your logo. I have encompassed a couple key ideas within this image, let me cover them.

First of all the blueprint design represents the guidelines that the automotive dealerships can adhere by to manage their operations.

The Stonehenge image represents balance and support. Each piece plays an important part in the stability of the structure. Just like all the departments when working together in harmony support each other, which allows everything to run smoother.

Looking forward to your comments.

[Leclerk]

http://www.logoholik.com/do/logoholik_precisiondealer04.gif

[jstutchman]

Chant at the fire...

[jstutchman]

Final prize posting in minutes

[jstutchman]

Lighting the money tree on fire...

[jstutchman]

Burn baby burn $1,600 in prize money!!!!

[jstutchman]

Feedback in minutes

[jstutchman]

Set the world on fire... Here we go...

[jstutchman]

Rooooaar!

[jstutchman]

Senter
Version 1

Likes: Design has message.

Dislikes: Looking for a much more aggresive design. Please post more ideas. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

Talso
Version 5

Likes: Good play on precision.

Dislikes: Though the idea is good, I need more of an aggressive thought.

[jstutchman]

Graphxguy
Version 1

Likes: Makes a statement in design. Very brandable...

Dislikes: Though the idea is good, I need more of an aggressive thought. Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

Fabian
Version 5

Likes: Your designs always present a solid idea.

Dislikes: Though the idea is good, I need more of an aggressive thought. Please post more ideas...

[jstutchman]

AlexKogan
Version 01

Likes: You worked on this with much thought and balance. I like deep thought.

Dislikes: Though the idea is good, I need more of an aggressive thought. Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

AlexKogan
Version 01 (version 02)

Likes: More deep thought from a brillaint mind... Please dig into the twisted commercial ideas of a market leader that does not conform to any rules...

[jstutchman]

freetime
Version 2

Likes: Balanced design with logo message

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for. Need more aggressive, like a new age market leader... Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

shnickerdoodle studios
Version_1

Likes: Thanks for listening to details... Very powerful design.

Dislikes: While the design speaks of precision and power, the gear design is too common. Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

Logoholik
Version 1

Likes: Thanks for joining. Claim some prize money... Get aggressive.

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for. Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

dache
Version 1

Design is too open.

[jstutchman]

dache
Version 2

Need much more idea and end user message in designs posted.

[jstutchman]

dache
Version 3

Likes: Better design, makes statement.

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for. Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

OffbeatDesign
Version 18

Likes: Off-center hurricane powerful. Warbler alarm in background...

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for. Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

OffbeatDesign
Version 19

Likes: Balanced design with automotive feel.

Dislikes: Simple road design is way too common. Think far more aggressive...

[jstutchman]

TwistedNewMedia
Version 2

Likes: Big message in a very classic art. Nice concept.

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for. Looking for a design that is far more market aggressive. Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

More feedback soon...

[jstutchman]

Shima
Version 1, 2, 3

Likes: Concept has message.

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for. Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

Shima
Version 4

Likes: Idea with direction

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for. Please post more ideas. Need far more aggressive. Eating up the market with power and precision...

[jstutchman]

tini1
Version 1b, 7

Likes: Targeted message.

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for. Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

graphxguy
Version 2

Likes: Very unique design of power and idea.

Dislikes: It seems every company out there has an arc design... Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

castell
Version 01

Likes: Unique thought...

Dislikes: Design is too soft.

[jstutchman]

OffbeatDesign
Version 20

Compass idea is too common...

[jstutchman]

davegk
Version 4

Need more intense concept than letters. Please post more ideas. Thanks.

[jstutchman]

nhr
Version 6.0

Likes: Very balanced concept with central focus and pronounced .com

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for, please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

Mark
Version 01

Likes: Very solid automotive design...

Dislikes: Your design is unique, but the car swoosh is too common. Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

Artemii
Version 2.0

Likes: Solid concept and message. Good job.

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for, need something more aggressive in statement at first glance. Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

Fabian
Version 7

Likes: Solid design with flare, and unique feel. Thanks.

Dislikes: While your design is impactful, I am looking for a logo that screams, "the company in-charge of the market". Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

Fabian
Version 8

Likes: Good pitch on a great concept. I am sure that took a lot of thought.

Dislikes: No dislikes, and a powerful concept... The design is not the one that makes me explode with anticipation. Please post more ideas.

[jstutchman]

castell
Version 02

Feels too earthday protest.

[jstutchman]

DesignGeneral
Version 02

Likes: Your pitch on the concept is so very powerful, pince you I will! Your design is unique in color, strong with message. Good job.

Dislikes: Not the design I am looking for, the design feels like crab. Crab says bottom feeder. Please post more great ideas.

[jstutchman]

castell
Version 03

Likes: Dragon powerful. Strong animal with roar...

Dislikes: Dragon design is too common in video games, not the generation we are trying to reach...

[jstutchman]

castell
Version 04

Good design, but feels like video game age.

[jstutchman]

castell
Version 06

Likes: Rooaaar with grace and style, very brandable. Royalty in the market.

Dislikes: No dislikes. I will keep this one in mind. Please post more aggresive concepts... Good job.

[jstutchman]

I will post more feedback in the next few days. Money is on fire!!!!

[jstutchman]

The last trivia round begins in five minutes and will be a great riddle. I have crafted this one to be very difficult against the common search engine. Hints will be given over the next few days. Stay tuned!

IMPORTANT! Every artist that has made a submission so far is eligible. Each artist is allowed to give 1 and only one answer!!! Watch the clues and choose wisely! First correct answer wins $100. Good luck! :eek:

[jstutchman]

Trivia
Riddle Question - Who am I?

[jstutchman]

Trivia
Hint #1 - I will begin at the beginning

[nhr]

God :)

[DesignGeneral]

Nice one Jeremy :)

[Blesseville]

I have something in mind, but I'd better wait for other hints to be sure. This does not count as an anwer, does it? :)

[DesignGeneral]

...precision dealer

[DesignGeneral]

it can be like this too...

[Mark]

You are either

Jeremy Stutchman, CEO of ITx10

or

Jim Stutzman from Chevrolet Cadillac Buick

[Mark]

v2 :)

[AlexKogan]

...that's fun :D
here's the #3 :)

[AlexKogan]

...and #4 :)

(hey, Mark, sorry for the same color palette ;) )

[AlexKogan]

...and #5 :)

[abby]

Project Update: The project deadline has been extended to March 9th and the amount has been raised to $1,600.

[OffbeatDesign]

Focus

[jstutchman]

Medigraph, your post does not count as an answer.

PS, In case there is any confusion, the trivia question is a riddle to figure out. I was not asking everyone to guess my name. :)

[jstutchman]

incorrect answer nhr

[jstutchman]

incorrect answer Mark. But yes, my name is Jeremy Stutchman.

[DesignGeneral]

You're a human being, a man formed from DNA, cells..., "a habit - see Sean Covey" and you could be Jackie Chan if you played in the "Who am I?" movie ... jstutchman :D

[Mark]

Grizzly Bear

[DesignGeneral]

who's the driver...? ;)

[Blesseville]

I was waiting as every designer has only and only one answer, but I decided to make my guess:

I think the answer is "bear" (It has a logic, but I am not sure if it is right :) )

[Just J]

Trivia
Hint #1 - I will begin at the beginning
I'm going to make my guess now too...

I remember reading this line a long time ago and it stuck with me for some reason. Instead of waiting for more hints (because I am horrible with riddles anyway ;) ), I thought I'd give it a shot now.

Plato - The Apology of Socrates

[freetime]

Another look

[freetime]

One more.

[jstutchman]

We have a winner on the last round of Trivia

[jstutchman]

I dare say, Athenians, that some one among you will reply, 'Yes, Socrates

[jstutchman]

Congrats to Jason. I was going to post another hint, but saw that Jason had answered correctly.

Plato - The Apology of Socrates

[jstutchman]

I will post more feedback on submissions later today.

[OffbeatDesign]

Nice work Jason!

[OffbeatDesign]

on point

[OffbeatDesign]

23

[OffbeatDesign]

24

[OffbeatDesign]

25

[castell]

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev7.gif

Castell

[castell]

Maybe an eagle(dragon).

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev8.gif

Castell

[djaka]

associated with knife
:D

[djaka]

:)

[Artemii]

v4

[djaka]

:d .

[castell]

Horse-power.

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev9.gif

Castell

[Just J]

Congrats to Jason. I was going to post another hint, but saw that Jason had answered correctly.

Plato - The Apology of Socrates
Thank you VERY much!!

BTW, in case you were interested in how I came about my design;

Latin praecīsiō, praecīsiōn-, a cutting off, from praecīsus, past participle of praecīdere, to cut off.

[djaka]

:d ..

[castell]

A previous concept enchanced.

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev10.gif

Castell

[castell]

A variation.

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev10a.gif

Castell

[castell]

More compact version.

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev10b.gif

Castell

[castell]

Whiney...

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev11.gif

Castell

[djaka]

play with the letters
:)

[djaka]

:d

[Leclerk]

well, it's an eight ball :)

http://www.logoholik.com/do/logoholik_precisiondealer07.gif

[Leclerk]

introducing sail concept...

http://www.logoholik.com/do/logoholik_precisiondealer08.gif

[nhr]

Hello again :)
Basic version of this concept:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b92/nhrdesign/DO_/PD8_nhr.png

[nhr]

Precise version:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b92/nhrdesign/DO_/PD81_nhr.png

Thank you.

[nhr]

And...

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b92/nhrdesign/DO_/PD9_nhr.png

:)

[OffbeatDesign]

Threading the needle, tying things together

[davegk]

Here's an idea...
It incorporates the image of a steering wheel, a bullseye, a gear, and of course the initials "P.D." in the center of the image. How's that for complex imagery conveyed in a clean, simple, iconic logo?

-David :yes:

[OffbeatDesign]

Reaching for higher goals (in sales, satisfaction, service...) with the shadow of the ladder suggesting the road.

[freetime]

Here's a little different look with the Pd

[freetime]

Again only tied together

[Leclerk]

:)

http://www.logoholik.com/do/logoholik_precisiondealer09.gif

[jstutchman]

Wow! This has been a fun project with great artists! There has been many great ideas and concepts.

It is crunch time!

[jstutchman]

I am reviewing all posts and submissions...

[jstutchman]

I want to give Senter a big One UP for being the first to recognize the correct answer by Jason on the last Trivia round. You my friend, are the true Jedi Master, your post was so very cool...

[jstutchman]

To all artists,

Please post your final entries within the next 12 hours. I will select the final artists for revision of individual designs at this time.

I was hoping to give feedback on every entry, but the time has drawn close. Please review my posts and feedback to date for direction. It is not too late to make a grand entrance...

:) :) :)

[jstutchman]

TwistedNewMedia

Version 3

You have given the best concept pitch so far... Please post more concepts on my posted feedback.

[jstutchman]

The best picks so far...

Pracus Version 7
Taldo Version 2
Medigraph Version 8
Skyvee Version 04
IDarwish Version 1
Castell Version 06
AlexKogan Version 03

This does not mean that any artist is excluded at this point, just pointing out the leaders so far. Hope this gives everyone direction. Do not post similar designs or revisions at this point.

[jstutchman]

As Albert Einstein noted...

[jstutchman]

Test1

[castell]

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev12.gif

castell

[castell]

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev13.gif

castell

[skyvee]

:)

[davegk]

another idea...
-David

[davegk]

concept 7
-David

[davegk]

concept 8...
-David

[BlueCherryGraphics]

Notice: Due to Design Outpost policy infractions, design(s) have been removed from this project thread. When the error is resolved, and complies to our guidelines, the designer will repost their entry. Thank you for understanding.

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UPDATE: All designs present

[pracus]

:)

[Taldo]

one last shot :)
Represents the "Best of the Best".

[davegk]

concept 9...
-David

[davegk]

concept 7a...
-David

[davegk]

concept 10...
-David

[skyvee]

:)

[skyvee]

V7

[BlueCherryGraphics]

V7 precise/road/on target

[BlueCherryGraphics]

v8 Here's the background on this one:

based on this definition of precision:

The ability of a measurement to be consistently reproduced.

I thought this was a good definition to use since you indicated earlier you were concerned with business processes/people/financial processes. You're essentially saying you can have them replicate successful results by following your instructions (I'm assuming).

This has the road to tie in with the auto aspect and the dashes/center line crossing the "S" represents the ability to reproduce the exact same results consistently over time.

[Carl]

Causality and Energy...

[davegk]

concept 11...
-David

[jstutchman]

OK everyone. I am closing the doors on new entry's at this time. I will be reviewing the potential of each and every concept submitted so far. I will be asking for revisions or elaboration on certain designs before making the final choices.

If you make a new entry after this point, it will be ignored...

[jstutchman]

Medigraph
Version 8.0

Give me some variations on the shark fin design. Don't get in a hurry. Give me your Sunday best!

Aggressive in the market

[jstutchman]

IDarwish
Version 1

The simplicity of the design is attractive. Can you make the design far more aggressive?

[jstutchman]

castell

Give me a bear roaring design, on top of the market.

[jstutchman]

carl

Give me more suggestions of causality other than your current design. Take your time.

[castell]

ROARRRRR!

Maybe also a body can be added, but like this it is more aggressive.

color variantinos coming...

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev14.gif

Castell

[castell]

A positive version + Colors.

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev14a.gif

Castell

[Blesseville]

First two are variation on fonts and layout.

http://www.blesseville.com/do/pdl8-1.jpg

[Blesseville]

http://www.blesseville.com/do/pdl8-2.jpg

[Blesseville]

And other variations.

http://www.blesseville.com/do/pdl8-3.jpg

[Blesseville]

http://www.blesseville.com/do/pdl8-4.jpg

[Blesseville]

http://www.blesseville.com/do/pdl8-5.jpg

[jstutchman]

An important note to all artists!

I have interest in several designs posted. Because I have not mentioned your design for revisions, does not mean your design isn't in my final selections. Stay tuned.;)

[jstutchman]

Medigraph,

Try the fin on top of the text. Maybe the text could have a shape of shark body without being a solid outline???

[jstutchman]

Castell,

I appreciate your hard work. But the designs feel like a team logo on a sports shirt. I am looking for more of a financial market feel... Look forward to your interpretation of my feedback.

[jstutchman]

OffbeatDesign

With version 13 in mind, could you give me a design that feels more money aggresive and intense?

[jstutchman]

pracus,

with the idea of version #7, the design concept has a good message, but the design feels way to Tetris. Could you come up with another design that includes the ideas of the original contest post?

[skyvee]

Hi, just wondering--can we still submit new concepts? Thanks! :)

[jstutchman]

Thanks Skyvee.

No new concepts at this point, concept phase has ended. But I will be asking for revisions and elaborations from artists over the next few days. I am sure that you will be included in such requests. Thanks.

[Carl]

Motion, Energy, Unison, Cause/Effect, Relationship, Balance, Executive...

[castell]

Thanks for the feedback, Jeremy.

I have been working on another bear, but just waited for your response. It is done with your target audience in mind.

So to say another Roarrrr ;)

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev15.gif

Castell

[castell]

just some quick color changes...

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev15a.gif

castell

[jstutchman]

castell,

I was hoping that maybe you had a design with a bear that was far more leadership and imposing along with a financial feel... Look forward your design.

[jstutchman]

Carl,

I feel the cause and effect. Please give me some font variations and positioning against the graphic.

[jstutchman]

AlexKogan,

Concept 3 has flavor. Could you post some variations...

[jstutchman]

Medigraph,

Dial in on version 8 second post with my last instructions. Thanks

[jstutchman]

Please post requested revisions by this weekend, so we can end this contest and pay someone big money!

[castell]

castell,

I was hoping that maybe you had a design with a bear that was far more leadership and imposing along with a financial feel... Look forward your design.

Will see to it. :D

[OffbeatDesign]

Thanks Jeremy

[OffbeatDesign]

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[pracus]

I will post yet another revision today :)

[castell]

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev16.gif

[Carl]

I will post my revisions later today.

:)

[castell]

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev17.gif

[castell]

http://www.visualadv.net/projects/pd/pd_prev17a.gif

[AlexKogan]

here they go :)

[AlexKogan]

...and #07...

[AlexKogan]

...08....

[AlexKogan]

...a....

[AlexKogan]

...erm... I'd better stop :)

[AlexKogan]

...ah, forgot one :D

[pracus]

:)

[Blesseville]

Sory for being late, I was on a business trip with limited access to Internet.

http://www.blesseville.com/do/pdl10.jpg

[jstutchman]

Not a problem Medigraph, I just finished burning a lot of jet fuel myself. I will be behind the desk for the next two days. I will post any last requests within the next 48 hours, and then we need to pick winners and pay money!

[jstutchman]

Big Money!

[jstutchman]

Big Money!
I thought I had good desk time to finish the contest, but Murphy's law likes to make it's own rules. I have to put out some fires as requested by emergency clients in great need.

I will be back to the post in a few days.;)

[jstutchman]

Carl,

Please post your design asap, before the post ends!

[jstutchman]

Because I am late, I think we should do one last trivia round... Let me know....

[Carl]

Typeface / Placement

[jstutchman]

Reviewing all submissions posted, one more time.

[jstutchman]

Pracus version 8 in the final running...

[jstutchman]

nhr version 2.0 in the final running...