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Superteens
05-28-2007, 06:55 AM
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This project is about making a logo for an online clothes store, selling clothes to teens and young adults of both sexes. The goods are mostly various established european brands (The store is in Denmark, Europe, and the audience/competitors are of this nationality).
Project Summary:

What text should be included in the main part of the logo?

The store name "Superteens", not much else. No real preference on how to style it. We're thinking that maybe the logo should be able to do without the name (But, mostly, with it).


What type of product or service do you offer?

Selling design labels clothing, accessories, shoes.


How long have you been in business?

Just planning on going into business these following months.


What do you hope to accomplish with your new identity?

Be an interesting, and memorable, online shop, with a logo that doesn't distract from the actual clothes and other items.


What are your long term goals?

A series of online shops with different themes, but maybe a linking through design.


When is the deadline for final entries before choosing a designer?

Deadline is (Friday) June 29th, around 1800 GMT (the exact time isn't that important though.

Audience Profile:

Please describe your existing audience

Hopefully teens and young adults, but business is not running yet.


Who would you like to add to your audience?
Tens and young adults, of both sexes.

Perception/Tone/Guidelines:
What type of logo would you like?



The logo should cater to both males and females, but shouldn't be too simple. Lots of curves, and should be slightly horisontal.
No thin lines or meshes
Not settled on weather text should be below or on the side of the logo (og maybe just part of it)
The logo shouldn't be so cute, that it ends up being childish.



Do you have any colors in mind for your logo? (if so, why?)



Not pink or light blue (We want to stay away from all the online baby clothings stores).
Well.. you've probably forgot more about colours that i'll ever know.. no primary colours?
No Magenta.. seems like T-Mobile owns that colour :P
Must work in both colours and B/W


Do you have any specific images or icons in mind that you would definitely like to see incorporated into your logo?

No real preferences here.


Communication Strategy:

What attributes would you like your logo to reflect about your business?

Should reflect that this is a friendly and serous business, that welcomes both male and female customers.


What is your tagline or slogan?

We have neither.


What is the overall message you are trying to convey to your target audience?

That nice qualities of clothing are available online, and not only in expensive stores.


Where will your new logo be used?

Logo will be used on the online store, on affiliate pages (community profiles and such), and possibly on letterheads/ business cards (to be determined, not critical for chosing the logo)


Competitive Positioning:

Who are your competitors and what do you think about their logos?

Other online stores that cater to the same target audience either don't have "designed logos", or only very simple ones. They also split stores/logos between sales for male and female customers.

Hope to hear from a lot of great designers! :)

shnickerdoodle studios
05-29-2007, 09:47 AM
One from me...
Thanks,
Deanna

BlueCherryGraphics
05-30-2007, 12:46 PM
v1

elogonics
06-03-2007, 07:06 AM
v1

pracus
06-03-2007, 07:12 AM
:)

elogonics
06-03-2007, 08:12 AM
v2

Leclerk
06-04-2007, 04:15 AM
http://www.logoholik.com/do/logoholik_superteens_01.jpg

Superteens
06-04-2007, 06:37 AM
Thanks for all the great logos you've already made :)

First off, a general comment.

We would like to see if the logo could bring closer associations to the clothes and/or teens that is our business, in case the company name don't.

Deanna v1

We really like non-linearity of the logo, and the way the two colours are used. We'd like to see another color than orange, though.

We like the font, but could it be a little less squished. The twirl is good though.

J. Johnson v1

We like the choice of colors, and the ying-yang/glass-marble part, but we don't like the mixing of lower-case and upper-case letters in the font.

we're also thinking about how a version with colored leters would look?

Carlos v1

We don't really get any associations with this one.. except maybe a postal stamp.

Also, as i wrote in the design guidelines, we don't want any thin lines.

Elogonics v1

We like the font, but would like the circle-thing to bring more associations to clothing/teens.

Maybe a little more colors, in the text and the circle part?

The B/W version of this one is great :)

Pracus v1

We like the colours, the horseshoe around the text and the font used.

The only thing we don't really like are the hotrod-fire, there's too much rocket about it (and the only hotrods danish teens have seen, are the ones in "Grease")

Maybe change the fire to something else, something people-like.

Elogonics v2

The S-part of the logo is too much like the logo for a very prominent danish club: DGI (Danske Gymnastik og Idrætsforeninger, and thus brings associations to sport and gymnastics. http://www.dgi.dk/verdensholdet/spansk/PR/DGI-logotipo.aspx

Also the scratches in the logo is far too much detail for our taste.

Logoholic

The colors, the overall layout of the logo, and the oval, but the big S brings associations with danish S-train stations. Maybe something else could be put in the oval? People-silhouettes?

elogonics
06-04-2007, 07:46 AM
Thanks.

giant
06-04-2007, 11:08 AM
Here's from me... :)
Thank You.

pracus
06-04-2007, 02:57 PM
:)

Bill
06-11-2007, 07:02 PM
Here's My Entry...

pickalogo
06-12-2007, 04:50 AM
http://travellot.ro/do/pickalogo_steens.gif

pickalogo
06-12-2007, 04:50 AM
http://travellot.ro/do/pickalogo_steens_01.gif

pickalogo
06-12-2007, 05:01 AM
http://travellot.ro/do/pickalogo_steens_02.gif

Leclerk
06-12-2007, 05:02 AM
http://www.logoholik.com/do/logoholik_superteens_02.jpg

Titania
06-12-2007, 05:39 AM
:)

shnickerdoodle studios
06-13-2007, 06:10 AM
Thanks for the feedback..

Here is a revision for you.
Thanks, Deanna

carlos(esparza)
06-23-2007, 10:05 PM
http://carlos.errorproductions.com/outpost/superteens.png

Superteens
07-02-2007, 11:58 AM
We have come to a point where we have made a decision, unfortunately not the final one.

We're grateful for all the fantastic logos you've all presented but of course we can't choose them all (you're not set on sharing we suppose ;))

We have decided that the two logos we like the most are Pracus Version #2 and titania Version 01, but also to extend the deadline a little to get a last revision through (if you decide to continue of course. If you don't we'd like you to tell us).

Pracus

We love the change from hotrod to flowers and circles, and the change of colors, but we would love if you could change the big S in the middle to be a little stronger. We're not sure exactly how, but heavier and not so "snake-like".

titania

We like the contrast of style, and the stars, but think it's a little more preteen than teen. We would like for the logo to appeal to an older audience. (we think it is more about the font than anything, but maybe the colors too).

Everyone else

Thank you for your suggestions :) and sorry for not choosing you

Titania
07-02-2007, 12:33 PM
thanks for the feedback! i'll work on your requests and will post asap! :yes:

pracus
07-02-2007, 12:59 PM
:)

Titania
07-04-2007, 08:40 PM
font and color options... :yes:

Titania
07-04-2007, 08:40 PM
:)

Titania
07-04-2007, 08:42 PM
and another one.. :D

Superteens
07-10-2007, 02:15 AM
Many thanks for the many designs Titania (very impressive), although i'm afraid that the guys in charge have chosen Pracus' design for our company.

We would like to move this logo thread to the revision forum.

Thanks again everyone who didn't get selected, there were many very good designs, and this has been a hard decision to make :)
(with a great many heated discussions i must say :D )

BlueCherryGraphics
07-10-2007, 02:44 AM
Congratulations Pracus.

This thread has been moved to the Revisions Forum.

Superteens, please post a note in the thread once you receive the final files.

Thanks! :)

pracus
07-10-2007, 03:18 AM
Thank you for choosing my design! Please let me know if you need any revisions to the logo or should I prepare you the files just as it is :)

Superteens
07-13-2007, 12:39 AM
Before finalizing there are two variations we'd like (and these are the last): A version with only the flowers and the S (A slim version or what you'd call it), and a version with www.superteens.dk beneath it :)

pracus
07-13-2007, 02:18 AM
:)

pracus
07-13-2007, 02:19 AM
:yes:

Superteens
07-13-2007, 08:26 AM
We are satsfied with the Version #3 logo, and would like if you could send the files :)

pracus
07-13-2007, 08:47 AM
The files have been sent via private message.
Thank you :)

Superteens
07-13-2007, 09:30 AM
We have received the logo files :)