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allenwc
10-01-2007, 07:33 PM
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PIPELINE ministry is located in Santa Cruz, CA. Santa Cruz is predominantly a surf/beach community located in Northern California.

We're looking for a very brand-able logo that can be used on business cards, websites, posters, t-shirts, etc.

We're looking for something that will appeal to teenagers, ages 14-18.

This logo would carry with it the idea of a wave or surfboard incorporated with the text "PIPELINE". Although the logo should be edgy, it should not be too complicated. Below are links of various logos and designs to give you an idea of the feel we are looking for.

Colors initially should be vibrant, however that can always be changed later by us.

http://www.mysurfbrands.com/surf-brands/o'neill-logos.php

http://www.mysurfbrands.com/surf-brands/billabong-logos.php

http://www.mysurfbrands.com/surf-brands/rip-curl-logos.php

http://www.mysurfbrands.com/surf-brands/volcom-logos.php
abby
10-02-2007, 06:18 AM
Client I have sent you an email to the address you registered with on how to make your deposit so your project can be reopen. Thank you
abby
10-03-2007, 06:47 AM
Project Update: This project has been validated and is now open to your entries.

The project deposit has been raised to $200 and the deadline is set for Oct 15th.
OffbeatDesign
10-03-2007, 08:59 AM
Wave as the "P"
OffbeatDesign
10-03-2007, 09:03 AM
v2
allenwc
10-03-2007, 02:56 PM
take a look at the billabong logo in the link in my intial post.

There's an image of a wave on that page. Something a little more distorted. A more aggressive logo is what i would like to see. Maybe a slant to the word pipleline. Sharper edging...less rounded.

Thanks for the initial submission.

Wave as the "P"
OffbeatDesign
10-03-2007, 03:36 PM
Thanks
OffbeatDesign
10-03-2007, 03:56 PM
v4
OffbeatDesign
10-03-2007, 04:53 PM
v5
Fabian
10-03-2007, 04:56 PM
After watching that "Sari" video I was inspired to do this.
allenwc
10-03-2007, 07:20 PM
The lettering on this one is great (version 4).

I still would like to see some change to the wave itself.

Look at this attachment.


I'd like to the words and the wave image work together in this layout. I'd also like to see the wave a little sharper and aggressive like this one.


v4
giant
10-03-2007, 10:15 PM
Here's from me... :)
thank you. viva la surf! :)
giant
10-03-2007, 10:32 PM
again... :)
thank you.
OffbeatDesign
10-04-2007, 03:56 AM
Thanks for the feedback
OffbeatDesign
10-04-2007, 04:03 AM
v7
OffbeatDesign
10-04-2007, 04:05 AM
v8
skyvee
10-04-2007, 05:17 AM
One from me. Thanks! :)
BlueCherryGraphics
10-04-2007, 08:28 AM
V1
BlueCherryGraphics
10-04-2007, 08:28 AM
V2
BlueCherryGraphics
10-04-2007, 08:28 AM
V3
allenwc
10-04-2007, 08:33 AM
SYVEE:

I really love the fluidity of the logo. However, as I've shown it to a few around here they can't get passed that the imagery seems to represent the letter "C". If you could tweak it somehow so this wasn't true.

Also, I like the lettering and two-tone. But if you could make the transitions between the two colors go straight across in one straight line, rather than the wave effect.
allenwc
10-04-2007, 08:47 AM
BLUE CHERRY GRAPHICS:


I really like some of what you've done here. Can you incorporate the font in version 1 with the logo in version 3.

Also, could you try removing the box from around the wave and have the word "pipeline" start inside the crest of the wave. This would entail making the wave a little bigger obviously.

Something like this (forgive the atrocity of this sketch):
allenwc
10-04-2007, 08:57 AM
OFFBEAT:

I like version 6 A LOT. Can you make it pop a little more somehow? Perhaps a VERY thin border around the logo and/or wave.

I'm not really sure...you may know better than I.
allenwc
10-04-2007, 09:01 AM
GIANT:

I really like what you've done here, as well.

Can you experiment with a few different layouts? Sitting "pipeline" in the crest of the wave like I mentioned above.

Or side-by-side. See what you can come up with.

LIke the logo...like the font (version 2)
BlueCherryGraphics
10-04-2007, 09:05 AM
v4
BlueCherryGraphics
10-04-2007, 09:06 AM
v5
OffbeatDesign
10-04-2007, 09:36 AM
Thanks for the feedback
OffbeatDesign
10-04-2007, 09:36 AM
v10
OffbeatDesign
10-04-2007, 09:38 AM
v11
OffbeatDesign
10-04-2007, 09:42 AM
v12
allenwc
10-04-2007, 09:46 PM
v5


BLUECHERRY:

Love version 5. Everyone here loves it.

Let's talk color schemes:

1) Can you experiment with a few different one's that include blues.

2). Try one a little more radical for us. We've attached a similar color scheme we would like to see. The entirety of the design would be on a black background. The section of the wave that is currently purple...would be white. The section of the wave that is currently white (because of the white background) would now be black (because of the new black background). The section of the wave that is currently red, would now be a deep blue...similar to the image I've attached. The word pipeline...would be white.

GREAT work.
skyvee
10-05-2007, 06:10 PM
:)
BlueCherryGraphics
10-05-2007, 07:03 PM
v6
BlueCherryGraphics
10-05-2007, 07:03 PM
v7
BlueCherryGraphics
10-05-2007, 07:04 PM
v8
BlueCherryGraphics
10-05-2007, 07:04 PM
v9
BlueCherryGraphics
10-05-2007, 07:04 PM
v10
BlueCherryGraphics
10-05-2007, 07:05 PM
v11
allenwc
10-08-2007, 10:28 AM
SKYVEE:

You hit it on the head with the logo and color scheme (Version_02). Don't change a thing.

Can you experiment with a few different fonts? Take a look at various Surf clothing companies to get some ideas.

Not to say we don't like this font. In fact, we like it a lot. We just want to see this design up against a few different font styles.

:)
skyvee
10-08-2007, 02:39 PM
No problem! :) Will be posting it in short while. Thanks!
OffbeatDesign
10-09-2007, 04:31 AM
v13
skyvee
10-09-2007, 04:46 AM
:)
skyvee
10-09-2007, 04:54 AM
another one... :)
skyvee
10-09-2007, 05:07 AM
:)
skyvee
10-10-2007, 05:47 AM
:)
allenwc
10-10-2007, 10:26 AM
Alvin & OFFBEAT,

Can you guys do a font similar to the attached one here? This is my old ministry. Had the logo designed on here, as well.

Alvin, do this keeping a similar style of font to version_02, however imitating the pattern inside.

OFFBEAT, do this keeping a similar style of font to your most recent entry.

PS:

Great job guys. This is some awesome stuff.
skyvee
10-10-2007, 07:22 PM
No Problem, I'll be posting the revision later today. Thanks! :)
skyvee
10-11-2007, 06:41 AM
Here we go... :)
allenwc
10-11-2007, 12:53 PM
ALVIN,

We still keep going back to version_02 as our favorite.

Our plan is to put this on an all black business card (like what I've attached).

Seeing as the bottom half of the lettering all black, we'd like to see what subtlety you can create to make the lower half of the words stick out. Someone here mentioned a white border around the words, but we feel that might be a little cheesy.

If you look at the "circle" that our old logo is inside (attached here), it is black, as well. Yet, the artist here was able to make it stand out somehow.

Give it a shot.



Here we go... :)
skyvee
10-12-2007, 04:44 AM
No problem :)
skyvee
10-12-2007, 04:46 AM
:)
skyvee
10-12-2007, 05:01 AM
:)
skyvee
10-12-2007, 05:10 AM
revised:)
allenwc
10-12-2007, 10:06 AM
ALVIN:

Do you have a more deeper/vivid black as a background?

Like the Axis logo I attached earlier.


:)
skyvee
10-12-2007, 03:08 PM
ok, here it is... :)
skyvee
10-12-2007, 03:44 PM
9b :)
skyvee
10-12-2007, 04:01 PM
10b :)
skyvee
10-12-2007, 04:19 PM
11b :)
allenwc
10-12-2007, 09:43 PM
Great stuff. We like 10b the best so far.

We want to see one last thing. Can you add the glow around 10b like you have in version_09?

Thanks.

10b :)
skyvee
10-13-2007, 12:33 AM
Ok, here it is. Thanks! :)
allenwc
10-13-2007, 09:48 AM
Thank you all so much for your entries. It's been great. So many good things came from this process.


However, there can only be one winner. I want to congratulate SYVEE (Alvin) on winning for his entry.

Alvin,

See you in the revisions forum.
skyvee
10-14-2007, 06:13 AM
Thanks for choosing my work, allenwc! :) Please let me know if there are any changes you'd like me to make.
allenwc
10-15-2007, 02:12 PM
A couple of things...nothing major.
abby
10-16-2007, 11:31 AM
Project Update: This project has been moved to the Revisions Forum.

Client Please post a message after you download your finial files to let me know your project is complete and I will transfer your deposit to your Designer. Thank you
allenwc
10-16-2007, 12:16 PM
Alvin,

Version_10-C is the winner.

If you wouldn't mind preparing a broad download package for us. Please click on the link below. If you could replicate the same package that was prepared for us on our last logo....that would be awesome.

http://web.mac.com/allencoleman/Site/LOGO.html

Based on what you see on this link, there should be a total of 16 files or so.

Thanks!
skyvee
10-17-2007, 05:13 AM
No problem! All the files you've requested has been uploaded. You may download them by clicking on the link I've sent thru private message (PM). :)
allenwc
10-17-2007, 10:06 AM
Received all the files.


Project Update: This project has been moved to the Revisions Forum.

Client Please post a message after you download your finial files to let me know your project is complete and I will transfer your deposit to your Designer. Thank you
BlueCherryGraphics
10-25-2007, 12:53 PM
PROJECT UPDATE: moved to Logo Project Archives.