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mnfulton
12-04-2009, 03:03 AM
(Admin code added by Palmer - 337462700M529830J)

Hi! I was looking for a logo for my dental office. Here is what I am looking for:
--Clear, crisp, colorful, clean, classy
--Easy to read
--Easy to identify as a dental office, but I don't like the extracted tooth logo in my business card (see attachment).

I have a new sign going in and I love the fonts and the setup, but need a better logo at the top of the sign. See sign attachment. I'm going to go with the 4th sign, the one at the very bottom.

Thanks!

Palmer
12-04-2009, 08:51 AM
Hello and welcome to Design Outpost. Please copy and paste the questions and answers from the following link to help the designers get started on the right track... http://www.designoutpost.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7819

Thank you :)

mnfulton
12-04-2009, 09:23 AM
Project Summary:
What text should be included in the main part of the logo?

None, looking for logo without text

What type of product or service do you offer?

Dental office

How long have you been in business?

6 years

What do you hope to accomplish with your new identity?

Identification as a dental office without an extracted tooth

What are your long term goals?

Providing great care to great patients

When is the deadline for final entries before choosing a designer?

12/31/09

Audience Profile:
Please describe your existing audience

Kind, friendly, loyal patients

Who would you like to add to your audience?

Young families

Perception/Tone/Guidelines:
What type of logo would you like?

Professional, clean, crisp

Do you have any colors in mind for your logo? (if so, why?)

Navy, light blue, perhaps a splash of light yellow--because I like them!

Do you have any specific images or icons in mind that you would definitely like to see incorporated into your logo?

Something that represents dentistry, but not an extracted tooth or smiley tooth!

Communication Strategy:
What attributes would you like your logo to reflect about your business?

Honesty, integrity

What is your tagline or slogan? N/A

What is the overall message you are trying to convey to your target audience? Trust, caring

Where will your new logo be used? Sign, business cards

Competitive Positioning:
Who are your competitors and what do you think about their logos? N/A

List competitive URLs if possible N/A

What sets you apart from your competitors? N/A

Targeted Message:
State a single-minded word or phrase that will appropriately describe your company:
Friendly service

mnfulton
12-05-2009, 10:12 AM
Anyone interested? Any ideas?

mnfulton
12-10-2009, 07:36 PM
bump

nutscreative
12-11-2009, 08:55 AM
Hi, a couple for your consideration. Thanks.:)

nutscreative
12-11-2009, 08:55 AM
v2:)

mnfulton
12-11-2009, 07:34 PM
Hi, a couple for your consideration. Thanks.:)

nutscreative,
Interesting. I'd like to see it with the following changes:
1. More colorful
2. A toothbrush instead of a mirror and explorer. (People don't like sharp dental instruments! ;))
3. Change the letter to a script "F"

I didn't quite have that in mind, but with the above changes it might go somewhere. Thanks for your help. Looking forward to seeing the revisions!

mnfulton
12-11-2009, 07:38 PM
v2:)
nutscreative,
This is a bit more abstract, which is good. I like the fact that it suggest dental without "YELLING" it like an extracted tooth or smiling molar does.

I think I would like brighter colors, perhaps just an "F" script letter.

This may grow on me. Thanks for your input.

nutscreative
12-11-2009, 07:57 PM
Hi, Thanks for your feedback. I will post my revision on Monday. Have a great weekend.:)

glyphica
12-11-2009, 10:32 PM
:)

nordy
12-12-2009, 07:58 AM
V1

mnfulton
12-12-2009, 12:04 PM
:)

Glyphica,
I like the colors. The toothbrush certainly identifies it as a dental office. Now the next step is to personalize it so it is identified as my dental office, perhaps with a script "F" somehow worked in. Good job so far.
Thanks,
mnfulton

mnfulton
12-12-2009, 12:06 PM
V1

Hi Nordy!
I really like the lettering at the top. However, I feel I need a graphic to identify it as a dental office since it will be going on the sign. See my original post--the logo will go where the extracted tooth is. Hope this helps.
Thanks so much,
mnfulton

nordy
12-13-2009, 08:11 AM
V2

art176
12-13-2009, 12:03 PM
V1 - teeth making family

Artemii
12-14-2009, 07:27 AM
Hello! :)

nutscreative
12-14-2009, 07:37 AM
Hi, Please see revised attached. Thanks :)

nutscreative
12-14-2009, 07:37 AM
:)

mnfulton
12-14-2009, 11:01 AM
V2
Hi Nordy,
While I like the lettering, I don't think the logo is large enough to "carry" the top of the sign. I'm looking more for a logo without much text that distinguishes it as a dental office and also MY dental office. Any ideas towards that end?
Thanks,
Matt

mnfulton
12-14-2009, 11:02 AM
V1 - teeth making family
Hi art176,
Thanks for posting. Trying to get away from extracted teeth in the logo. Like the family concept, though.
Thanks,
Matt

mnfulton
12-14-2009, 11:05 AM
Hello! :)
Hi Artemii,
Thanks for posting! Unfortunately, I think the logo is too abstract. I want a simple design that easily says dental office, hopefully without an extracted tooth.
Regards,
Matt

mnfulton
12-14-2009, 11:07 AM
:)
Hi nutscreative,
I think I prefer the tooth/smile outline better than the toothbrushes. I would prefer to see it with just a script F, no M. or N. Can you use a different font? Interested to see the revision.
Thanks for your time,
Matt

Artemii
12-14-2009, 01:14 PM
Thank you for the feedback. Here's version 2...

Artemii
12-14-2009, 01:23 PM
...and version 3.

nordy
12-14-2009, 02:48 PM
V3

nutscreative
12-14-2009, 06:28 PM
Hi, Please see revised attached. Thanks :)

nutscreative
12-14-2009, 06:45 PM
:)

mnfulton
12-15-2009, 09:19 AM
...and version 3.

Artemmii,
Very interesting. I like the concept. I'll show it to my wife and get a female perspective.
Thanks,
Matt

mnfulton
12-15-2009, 09:37 AM
V3

Nordy,
Thanks for posting. This one doesn't quite work for me. I think it is too blue, not clean enough. I'm not quite sure how to make it better. Thanks for your time.
Regards,
Matt

mnfulton
12-15-2009, 10:23 AM
Hi, Please see revised attached. Thanks :)

Hi nutscreative!
I think I like version 5 better than version 6. I don't like the fonts of the "F" in #5. I was wondering how if would look with the "f" from #6.
Thanks,
Matt

nutscreative
12-21-2009, 01:04 PM
Hi, sorry for delay, please see revised attached. Thanks.:)

BlueCherryGraphics
02-03-2010, 08:15 PM
PROJECT UPDATE: client contacted via email [C2 | CC290]

mnfulton
02-04-2010, 08:35 AM
Hi everyone! So sorry for the delay. Between the holidays, tax planning, tax forms, and oh yeah, running my business, this one got away from me. Sorry about that. I won't let it happen again.
I'd like to create a new due date of March 15th.
Post away and I promise to be more timely in my responses.

mnfulton
02-04-2010, 08:37 AM
Hi, sorry for delay, please see revised attached. Thanks.:)
Hi nutscreative,
I'll certainly keep this one in mind, but would like to see some other ideas. I think some people may feel that it is a bit too abstract--but I certainly like it and it is in the running. Thanks for the nice work!
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
02-04-2010, 06:22 PM
PROJECT UPDATE: deadline extended to March 15

BlueCherryGraphics
06-06-2010, 11:18 AM
Matthew,

Please check in with us with an updated deadline and any feedback, requests you have.

Thanks!

mnfulton
06-06-2010, 11:28 AM
Matthew,

Please check in with us with an updated deadline and any feedback, requests you have.

Thanks!

New deadline is August 31, 2010. Would like to see some new creations.

BlueCherryGraphics
06-06-2010, 11:31 AM
PROJECT UPDATE: Deadline has been changed to August 31st. Good luck designers. :)

BlueCherryGraphics
07-22-2010, 10:29 PM
v1

Artemii
07-24-2010, 08:24 AM
:)

Platre
08-26-2010, 10:03 PM
v1

Platre
08-26-2010, 10:13 PM
v2

BlueCherryGraphics
09-25-2010, 10:09 AM
Client,

Please check in with us on the status of your project and:

-provide feedback on existing designs
-feel free to request new concepts
-advise us of an updated due date if applicable

Thanks!

BlueCherryGraphics
10-16-2010, 10:32 AM
PROJECT UPDATE: email sent to client [C2 | CC403]

BlueCherryGraphics
10-30-2010, 03:39 PM
PROJECT UPDATE: client contacted via email [C3 | CC425]

mnfulton
10-30-2010, 06:07 PM
Hi everyone!
Sorry I've been absent. . .I'm not sure if I received e-mail updates that there were new postings. I apologize for this.

I'm creating a new deadline of 11/30

I like the work so far, but I believe it contains too much text. I am looking for a logo at the top of the sign in the circle:
To recap: . Here is what I am looking for:
--Clear, crisp, colorful, clean, classy
--Easy to read
--Easy to identify as a dental office, but I don't like the extracted tooth logo in my business card (see attachment).

I have a new sign going in and I love the fonts and the setup, but need a better logo at the top of the sign. See sign attachment. I'm going to go with the 4th sign, the one at the very bottom.

Thanks!
Attached Images

mnfulton
10-30-2010, 06:12 PM
v2

Dear Platre,
I like the colors, but I believe there is too much text. I am looking for more of a logo with minimal text for the top of the sign.
Sorry for the delay in providing feedback. I don't think I received e-mail updates.

Thanks,
Matt

mnfulton
10-30-2010, 06:14 PM
v1

Platre,
I again like the colors, but the logo I think is more appropriate for an orthodontist, not general dentist. Thanks for posting!
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
10-30-2010, 06:16 PM
PROJECT UPDATE: deadline extended to 11/30

mnfulton
10-30-2010, 06:18 PM
v1

Jennifer,
Very nice job! I like the font and script F! I think it would be great on my letterhead.

A few issues:
--I think I like a lighter color of yellow
--I'm looking for more of logo at the top of the sign, need less text surrounding the body of the logo.

I'm interested to see your further ideas.

Thanks,
Matt

mnfulton
10-30-2010, 06:23 PM
:)

Dear Artemii,
Thanks for posting. While I like the smile and the concept of the toothbrushes, I think it is a bit too whimsical and also has too much text.
I'm looking for a clean, crisp logo at the top of my sign.

Can you come up with something else, while still keeping the smile?


Thanks,
Matt

mnfulton
11-12-2010, 03:42 AM
bump

BlueCherryGraphics
01-01-2011, 07:23 PM
Client,

Please check in with us on the status of your project and:

-provide feedback on existing designs
-feel free to request new concepts
-advise us of an updated due date if applicable

Thanks!

mnfulton
01-02-2011, 03:48 PM
Client,

Please check in with us on the status of your project and:

-provide feedback on existing designs
-feel free to request new concepts
-advise us of an updated due date if applicable

Thanks!

Hi Jennifer!
I think you have the closest concept to what I would like. Can you please change the yellow to a bit brighter color, and also I would like to see some other fonts, I like Copperplate Gothic Bold in word, or a similar all caps font.
I look forward to seeing your design revisions.
thanks,
Matt Fulton

BlueCherryGraphics
01-02-2011, 03:59 PM
v2 here you go...

mnfulton
01-02-2011, 04:08 PM
v2 here you go...

OK, I think the yellow still needs to be brighter.
I think Fulton looks too bold, perhaps just normal text
I'd like to see some navy in the script F.

Other than that, I think we are getting close!

BlueCherryGraphics
01-02-2011, 04:14 PM
v3

BlueCherryGraphics
01-02-2011, 04:15 PM
v4

mnfulton
01-02-2011, 04:20 PM
v3

Hi Jennifer!
I like the changes to the yellow and the script f. In version 4, I think I'd like to see those changes and revert back to the font in version 1, just so I can compare. Something about the font in v3 just looks a bit off to me, but I can't say for sure until I see it compared to v1.
Thanks so much. I'll be signing off for the evening, but can review your designs tomorrow.
Thanks for everything!
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
01-02-2011, 04:24 PM
Sounds good; I think this is what you wanted to see.

BlueCherryGraphics
01-02-2011, 04:25 PM
v6 and here it is with all the blue at 100%

mnfulton
01-02-2011, 04:50 PM
Hi Jennifer!
Version 5 is it. Thanks for the good work. How do I proceed from here?
Thanks,
Matt

BlueCherryGraphics
01-02-2011, 06:25 PM
Hi,

Thank you for selecting my design.

Download instructions and detailed information on the included file formats have been sent to you via private message. You can access that message here:

http://www.designoutpost.com/forums/private.php?

I am moving the thread to archives, but it's still open if you need to post to it and of course, if you have any questions, feel free to contact me.

Thanks again,