Thanks for your post. I have modified the project requirements
to include the .EPS format as optional. We apologize for exclu-
ding you (and others) with this initial requirement. We look
forward to seeing your design(s) & concept(s).
Thanks for your post as well. We like your initial design, it gives
up a good feel for what the final layout will look like for this
project. We like the copy split up the way it is (w/ the sidebars
on both sides of the labeling. The spacing above & below the
nutrition facts panel is great as we'll need a place to include
"Suggested use" (above) and "Additional ingredients:" (below)
this section. We'll be able to supply the added text closer to
completion of the project. For now, the use of filler text, other
than the middle/main part of the logo, is fine. The modified
logo layout would be centered within the middle panel.
For the logo, please try breaking it up so that the graphic
image (above the name) is to the left and have the name to
the right. We're going to lose the "SKINCARE REGIMEN" portion
as this will be used solely for the topical products. Also, the
overall size of the logo can be smaller. These changes should
allow for more room in the middle panel. For now, let's try
ANTI-ACNE SUPPLEMENT, with it smaller to fit within the area?
The ANTI-ACNE SUPPLEMENT wording should be changed to
a dark purple color as well. It will go well with the color of
the product that will be visible to our clients (clear bottles).
Below I will suggest a lighter color background...as I know
you must be thinking black label w/ dark purple text......what?
The water looks great, excellent touch. Can we try a version
of this for the side panels (or throughout the entire label?) and
see how this looks? (even if it is slightly faded out on the side
panels so that that customers can easily read the text).
The apple looks good. We wanted to add other fruits as well,
as the following fruit juices will be used: Apple, Grape - purple,
Orange, Pear, Pineapple, Cherry, Pomegranate, Strawberry,
Blueberry, Raspberry, and Mango. I am not sure if all would
look good/acceptable within the layout...either in the middle
panel or broken up over entire layout...but it will give you an
idea of the options available.
We like the way the black background stresses the green
color of the logo and copy. However, after some initial feed-
back there was a concern for the final product appeal (after
the juice has been added). The final product will be a dark
purple color. The were thoughts that the darker layout would
ultimately not be as visually appealing as a lighter layout once
the juice has been added.
For the "Apple Flavour" copy...can we try this (w/o quotes):
"100% Vegan & Gluten FREE - Low Carb - Low Calorie"
Please replace (-) w/ the bullets, they look great. The text
may need to be smaller than it is make this work? If this looks
good than we'll be getting removing these text blocks from
the middle of the layout as well. [25oz / 750ml will be used on
bottom of middle panel]
BTW, if we tighten up the middle portion of this layout with
the ideas given above would adding another "100% Vegan..."
to the right side of the layout look more appealing? I guess
the idea is that this will be wrapping around a bottle and
we don't want the middle panel to spread too wide across the
front and not allow the main/middle window to catch the
We'll probably put the "Contains no...sweeteners" line of
copy at the bottom of the Nutrition Facts sidebar.
Thanks for your submissions. We're looking forward to seeing
your revisions and any added concepts that you may come
up with for this project.